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a flowchart below shows the physical circle of poverty at institutional and individual levels summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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It is evident from the chart that lack of Critical Mass for service and Infrastructures lead to flow rate of business creation because funds are not enough to construct building. So there will be fewer jobs that will available for the local people. , reason employees move away for finding better opportunities in other places. when this happened population will decrease. At the individual level the viscous circle of poverty if a person belongs to poverty stricken sector of community finishing studies will be a struggle due to poor financial condition. And if this happen the the they will not be competent in enough to acquire a job that can offer above minimum compensation because he lacks the needed skills to be qualified. This will lead to unstable security to provide basic necessity to one self and worst there will be no extra saving for health insurance. Since the salary is not enough. Easy solution for this will be borrowing money to other people it will all be paid to debit and this will continue as long as the person will not be equipped with the needed knowledge on how to properly spend and save money.
It is evident from the chart that lack of Critical Mass for service and Infrastructures lead to flow rate of business creation
because
funds are not
enough
to construct building.
So
there will be fewer jobs that will available for the local
people
.
,
reason employees
move
away for finding better opportunities in other places.
when
this happened population will decrease. At the individual level the viscous circle of poverty if a person belongs to
poverty stricken
sector of community finishing studies will be a struggle due to poor financial condition. And if
this happen
the
the they
will not be competent in
enough
to acquire a job that can offer above minimum compensation
because
he lacks the needed
skills
to
be qualified
. This will lead to unstable security to provide basic necessity to one self and worst there will be no extra saving for health insurance.
Since
the salary is not
enough
. Easy solution for this will be borrowing money to other
people
it will all
be paid
to debit and this will continue as long as the person will not
be equipped
with the needed knowledge on how to
properly
spend and save money.
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IELTS academic a flowchart below shows the physical circle of poverty at institutional and individual levels

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6.0
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