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STATEMENT OF PURPOSE I, Parmjit Singh, i have opted for a diploma in Software Quality Assurance from Kensley College in Canada since i feel the need to be specialize in this field not only to have a deeper knowledge of the subject area, but also to learn different practical ways. In-depth, in this technical era, knowledge about Software’s has become need of the hour. Software not only makes my computer hardware perform important tasks, but can also help my business work more efficiently. The right software can even lead to a number of new ways of working. Computer software has made it easier than ever to connect with friends all over the world using social networks. As software becomes more integrated into electronics and appliances, it will continue to simplify life's challenges. I, therefore, have chosen this course in order to gain more knowledge about Software. • My Educational Background: My first priority in my life is knowledge and study along with pursuing my academic dreams and aspirations. I have tried my best in it throughout my study years. I would like to explain a brief about my achievements: After completing my Secondary Education from school affiliated to Punjab School Education Board, I did my Senior Secondary Education in Arts stream from same board with 67. 8%. Then I completed my Bachelor of Arts under Panjab University with 64. 4% marks along with diploma in computer applications Throughout the final year of my degree program. Then I decided to continue my further study in Canada. For this purpose I have appeared IELTS Examination on 20-03-2021 and I scored Overall 6. 0 band. • Why I chose Canada as my study destination In India, I felt lack of knowledge since the study pattern is more theoretical than practical. Also, the institutions in India are far from being at par with the international standards and moreover, in India, there is the quota & reservation system too; however, Canada's education system is excellent and ranks among the best in the world. Canada is a peaceful, politically stable and safe country. It has internationally recognized diploma, degrees, & provides excellent health care to international students. I aspire for an education, recognized all over the world and not just within the given geographical boundary. With increasing edge over scientific and technological innovation resulting from result oriented academic system, Canada has world’s leading higher education institutions and universities that offer cutting edge academics. Futhermore, I wish to study from Canada as the lure of a foreign Diploma in Software Quality Assurance at Kensley College, Canada. It will not only provide me global exposure, but also excellent research opportunities and the associated career benefits are equally attractive. Thus, I decided to continue my studies in Canada. • Why this Particular College (Kensley College) for my further studies? In order to choose my institution, i not just searched over the internet, but also take advice from my dear ones. And, after collecting valuable information, i chose Kensley College amongst them since Kensley College is committed to provide skills-based, simple, and caring education that promotes student academic and career success. In addition, Kensley College is a premier learning institute widely recognized for its outstanding academic reputation. Besides this, With a beautiful campus and vibrant community holding in, Kensley College provide the learning experience, that is supported by highly experienced and trained faculty from a wide range of discipline and industries. Additionally, with a Canadian Advance Diploma, I will have better employment opportunities both in my home country and other parts of the world. In order to create a niche for myself in the field of software I took a logical step towards further education by aspiring to study Software Quality Assurance at Kensley College, Canada. For these reasons, I hope to acquire software skill knowledge in Canada and learn from reputable professors with outstanding learning facilities. • Why I have chosen Software Quality Assurance Course at Kensley College? I had developed my interest in subjects related to the Software Studies during the final year of my bachelor degree because many of my friends were from this field. And, i came across that knowledge about Software will be an absolute need in the nearest future and hence, in order to understand the fundamentals of this feild, i enrolled myself in one year Diploma in computer application. In this diploma, i had studied Computer fundamental, HTML, C, C++ programming and also working on different software’s. It instilled dedication to me to go delve deeper in this field. I, therefore, choose software quality assurance course for my higher study despite being an arts stream student. Now current time almost all works is done on different types of software’s. The demand of software developer is also high. Because with the help of different type of software’s the difficult works get easy. So I want to learn about software that’s why I have chosen Software Quality Assurance course. As much as the development of the software matter, the standards set for their development and also matter. The course identifies the need for quality development and management in the evolution of software technologies. Kensley Software testing and Quality Assurance diploma course cover all the aspects of manual and automated testing methods. To set the basics high, they designed the curriculum that ensures the fundamentals of testing, languages used and Databases. Students will learn to apply various development methods, testing techniques, test script writing, and defect detection. have chosen to study from Kensley College because of its best location, ranking, faculty and industry connections. • What I will learn from this course and what I will do in India? The quality assurance training will help me participants understand the key concepts of software testing. I will learn what the role and responsibilities of Quality Analyst are in the various stages of the SDLC. Within this course, I will also learn how to follow up on challenges in the JIRA app. This Software Quality Assurance course will also help me to understand a different framework for automatic testing. Upon completion of this SQA course, I will be able to perform tasks such as managing the evaluation process, analysis, and other administrative-related tasks in the HP Quality Control application. This Course also offers a Co-op terms which will allow me to work in an industry related to my field. This will puts me miles ahead of someone who has no work experience in the eyes of a future employer. Moving further, although i have many job opportunities in Canada, yet i would like to work in my home country India and the reason is, employment rate in IT field is also high not just in private but in government sector too. Some Career Opportunities in India after Competing my course in Canada: Application inspector / system testing specialistSoftware test coordinator / Software testerSoftware Construction Engineer / Software Designer Verification EngineerSoftware Developer / Software Test EngineerIntegration Software Engineer - Software / Technology Builder – Software. Here, is my job research which position and salary I will get after I coursehttps: //techbeacon. com/app-dev-testing/6-career-ideas-software-qa-professionalshttps: //www. naukri. com/software-quality-assurance-jobs Undoubtedly, After completing my course, I will easily get job in my home country in software field. I will work in the posts related to software studies. This job offers me excellent Salary package in my home country like: Software and computer technology tend to be higher paying fields. Median Annual Pay: 88, 510, Top 10% and Bottom 10% Annual Pay: Less than 10, 00, 000. I will also getting good salary package in my home country as a software developer. The average system software developer salary is Rs. 5, 89, 581. An entry-level system software developer can earn around Rs. 4, 60, 000 per annum. During this program, I will be learning about all the desired skills, knowledge, and aptitude required for effective software that will help me provide better skills. I will equip myself with advanced analytical tools and techniques that will foster managerial efficiency. • Financial Declaration: My father is ready to fund and support my educational journey in Canada. Further he will provide me any support in future whenever needed for me to complete my educational goal. My parents will need my presence and strong support to look after them. Besides, availability of excellent job and growth opportunities is also a very strong reason for me to come back. My father is an agriculturist, ………………………I have paid GIC in Scotia Bank. • Come back to my home country. I will come back to India. As mentioned before, the most important reason to enroll in this program is to upgrade my professional skills not only to become more resourceful but this will also provide me with better opportunities to excel after the study. I will come back to India for sure as my family and friends reside in India and I want to work and live in my home country. I am financially strong. After completing my study from an international institute, i will be able either to get high-paid job or start my own business in my home country. Thus, I don’t have any plan of permanent residence in Canada. Kindly, consider my application and grant me the permission to study in Canada on the grounds of me fulfilling the entire academic as well as the language proficiency requirements. I have genuine intentions of studying in Canada to enhance my level of knowledge and experience regarding this field. I will abide by Canadian laws and will not break any student visa conditions. On the basis of the above submission, I humbly request the honorable immigration officer to consider my application favorably towards issuance of a study permit to pursue my education from Canada. Therefore, I am looking forward for the opportunity to be a part of the Canada and to study Software Quality Assurance, at Kensley College, Quebec (Montreal). Thanking You, PARMJIT SINGH
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Software
. Here, is my
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job
research which position and
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salary
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get
after I
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coursehttps
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techbeacon
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com
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ideas
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www
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naukri
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com
/software-quality-assurance-jobs
Undoubtedly
, After completing my
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course
, I will
easily
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get
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job
in my home
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country
in
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software
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field
. I will
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work
in the posts related to
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software
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studies
. This
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job
offers me
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excellent
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Salary
package in my home
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country
like:
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Software
and computer technology tend to be higher paying
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fields
. Median Annual Pay: 88, 510, Top 10% and Bottom 10% Annual Pay: Less than 10, 00, 000. I will
also
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getting
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good
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salary
package in my home
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country
as a
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software
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developer
. The average
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system
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software
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developer
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salary
is Rs. 5, 89, 581. An entry-level
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system
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software
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developer
can earn around Rs. 4, 60, 000 per annum. During this program, I will be
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learning
about all the desired
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skills
,
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knowledge
, and aptitude required for effective
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software
that will
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help
me
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provide
better
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skills
. I will equip myself with advanced analytical tools and techniques that will foster managerial efficiency.

• Financial Declaration:

My father is ready to fund and support my educational journey in Canada.
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Further
he will
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provide
me any support in future whenever needed for me to complete my educational goal. My parents will
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need
my presence and strong support to look after them.
Besides
, availability of
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excellent
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job
and growth
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opportunities
is
also
a
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very
strong
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reason
for me to
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come
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back
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I
have paid
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GIC
in Scotia Bank.

•
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back
to my home country.

I will
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come
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back
to India. As mentioned
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before
, the most
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important
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reason
to enroll in this program is to upgrade my professional
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skills
not
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only
to become more resourceful
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but
this will
also
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provide
me with better
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opportunities
to excel after the
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study
. I will
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come
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back
to India for sure as my family and friends reside in India and I want to
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work
and
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live
in my home
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country
. I am
financially
strong. After completing my
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study
from an international institute,
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i
will be able either to
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get
high-paid
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job
or
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start
my
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own
business in my home
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country
.
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, I don’t have any plan of permanent residence in Canada. Kindly, consider my
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application
and grant me the permission to
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study
in Canada on the grounds of me fulfilling the entire
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academic
as
well
as the language proficiency requirements. I have genuine intentions of studying in Canada to enhance my level of
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knowledge
and experience regarding this
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field
. I will abide by Canadian laws and will not break any
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student
visa conditions. On the basis of the above submission, I
humbly
request the honorable immigration officer to consider my
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application
favorably
towards issuance of a
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study
permit to pursue my
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education
from Canada.
Therefore
, I am looking forward for the
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opportunity
to be a part of the Canada and to
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study
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Software
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Quality
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Assurance
, at
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Kensley
College, Quebec (Montreal).

Thanking You,
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PARMJIT
SINGH
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IELTS speaking Why people choose canada as their sdudy destination discuss all the aspects

Speaking
  American English
17 paragraphs
1652 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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