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The importance of learning english in our real lives

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In today’s mordern society, English is the most common language to communicate and everybody need to study English, so why is English improtant? First, we can use it to watch English films, listen to English music and read the interesting books and magazines in English. Second, we can travel around the world because a lot of people or countries are using English to speak and when we go travel, we can meet lots of international friends even your future husband. If we meet many internatonal friends, we will study somethings from their countries, their culture and their tradition. Then we can explore our horizon. Next, when we studied a lot of things from them, we can find the best job for ourselves and earn much money. Finally, English can be use to read the instructions of tech masuals and devices. So English is very necessary. If you want to have better live, let study English.
In
today
’s
mordern
society, English is the most common language to communicate and everybody need to study English,
so
why is English
improtant
?

First
, we can
use
it to
watch
English films, listen to English music and read the interesting books and magazines in English.

Second, we can travel around the world
because
a lot of
people
or countries are using English to speak and when we go travel, we can
meet
lots of international friends even your future husband. If we
meet
many
internatonal
friends, we will study somethings from their countries, their culture and their tradition. Then we can explore our horizon.

Next
, when we studied
a lot of
things from them, we can find the best job for ourselves and earn much money.

Finally
, English can be
use to
read the instructions of tech
masuals
and devices.

So
English is
very
necessary. If you want to have better
live
,
let
study English.
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IELTS speaking The importance of learning english in our real lives

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