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Talk about subject you would like to study in the future

Talk about subject you would like to study in the future EdYjD
In the future, I would like to study Computer Science. Because first of all I'm a software developer and I would like to improve my knowledge and skills deeply in this field. Second of all, I'm really enthusiastic about it. In this kind of science, I am really interested in problem-solving, clean architecture, and clean code. Actually, When I achieve a good IELTS band score then I will study Computer Science. There are lots of resources on the internet about it. Also, everybody can take the Harvard CSX50 course freely on the internet. It would be good to study at university but it needs a lot of money and time. Because of that, I will study by myself.
In the future, I would like to
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first of all
I'm a software developer and I would like to
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improve
my knowledge and
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skills
deeply
in this field. Second of all, I'm
really
enthusiastic about it.

In this kind of science, I am
really
interested in problem-solving, clean architecture, and clean code.

Actually
, When I achieve a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
IELTS band score then I will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
Computer Science. There are lots of resources on the internet about it.
Also
, everybody can take the Harvard CSX50 course
freely
on the internet. It would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
to
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study
at university
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but
it needs
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a lot of
money and time.
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Because
of that, I will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
by myself.
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IELTS speaking Talk about subject you would like to study in the future

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4 paragraphs
118 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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