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Talk about your favorite number

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In the modern life, we can’t live without numbers. We need numbers every day. Sometimes people like to make personal numbers. Sometimes we have a personal memory involves numbers. My favorite number is 20 because this number relate to success. One of my best memorise from my childhood was getting 20 in exams. I tried to get 20 because that was important to me and made me happy. I was born in 24th of 7th month and I got the job in 24th. I got married in 22th. 22 is a beautiful number. I liked it because it's the day my son was born on. Also my daughter was born on 7th. It is supposed to be a special number in my life. Maybe these are my lucky number.
In the modern life, we can’t
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every day.
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we have a personal memory involves
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. My favorite
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is 20
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this
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relate to success. One of my best
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from my childhood was getting 20 in exams. I tried to
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20
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that was
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to me and made me happy.

I
was born
in 24th of 7th month and I
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got
the job in 24th.
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I
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married in
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22th
.

22 is a
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beautiful
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. I liked it
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it's the day my son
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on.
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Also
my daughter
was born
on 7th.

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is supposed
to be a special
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in my life. Maybe these are my lucky
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IELTS speaking Talk about your favorite number

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4 paragraphs
129 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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