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Describe how you spend your free time

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Hi from the other side of ocean. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. You cannot imagine how happy I am to be able to tell you about myself before I see you. I am Anahit. I am 14 years old. I am from Armenia. I live in a very small village which is very beautiful. The people living here are very kind and helpful. I have a very positive family. I live with my mother, father, sister and grandmother. There is always a smile on their face. My family plays a big role in my life. Thanks to them, I have achieved a lot of success and development. We love spending time together. The happiest days are the days when we are all at home and can spend more time together. We like to watch movies and cook together. And during the holidays, we go sightseeing. I have some responsibilities at home. For example, I must help my sister to do homework, help my mother to clean home, if my mother isn't at home I must cook dinner, I must help my grandmother with garden work and I must give my grandmother her medicine. But I do it all with great pleasure. I cannot describe my friends in words. They are the best. I thank them for every happy moment. They are always by my side and help me in every issue. My best friends' names are Mane, Aren, Mariana and Robert. Mane has a small studio in their home where we sing and Aren plays guitar. We have a lot of things in common. We love to do many activities together. For instance we love to watch movies, do homework, volunteering, take pictures together, to listen to music and to cook. Robert is my international friend who lives in Greece. They visit Armenia from time to time and we have a great time together. We also use that time for cultural exchange. Our distance from each other is not felt at all and does not hinder us because we talk on video call every day. I want to share my interests with you. I like sports especially swimming and running. They are also necessary for my health. Every morning I do yoga. In addition to sports, I like reading books, playing games, playing in the yard with my friends, reading new information. I like learning everything useful. I like to learn about different countries, their cultures, and share that information with my friends. I also like dancing, volunteering, cooking and most importantly, I love to travel. My biggest goal is to travel all over the world.
Hi from the other side of ocean. Thank you for taking the
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to read my letter. You cannot imagine how happy I am to

be able to
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tell
you about myself
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I
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Anahit
. I am 14 years
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I
am from Armenia.
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I
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in a
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village which is
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. The
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living here are
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kind and helpful.

I have a
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positive
family. I
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with my mother, father, sister and grandmother. There is always a smile on their face.

My family plays a
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big
role in my life. Thanks to them, I have achieved
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a lot of
success and development. We
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love


spending
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together. The happiest days are the days when we are all at home and can spend more
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time
together. We

like to
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watch
movies and cook together. And during the holidays, we go sightseeing. I have
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some
responsibilities at

home.
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, I
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must
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my sister to do homework,
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my mother to clean home, if my mother isn't at home I

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cook dinner, I
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my grandmother with garden work and I
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give my grandmother her medicine.
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I do

it all with great pleasure. I cannot
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describe
my friends in words. They are the best. I thank them for every happy moment. They are always by my

side and
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me in every issue. My best friends' names are Mane,
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Aren
, Mariana and Robert. Mane has a
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small
studio in

their home where we sing and
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Aren
plays guitar. We have
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a lot of
things in common. We
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love
to do
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many
activities

together. For
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to
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movies, do homework, volunteering, take pictures together, to listen to music

and to cook. Robert is my international friend who
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in Greece. They visit Armenia from
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time and
we have a

great
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together. We
also
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that
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for cultural exchange. Our distance from each other is not felt at all and does

not hinder us
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because
we talk on video call every day.

I want to share my interests with you. I like sports
especially
swimming and running. They are
also
necessary for my

health. Every morning I do yoga.
In addition
to sports, I like reading books, playing games, playing in the yard with my

friends, reading new information. I like learning everything useful. I like to learn about
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different
countries, their cultures,

and share that information with my friends. I
also
like dancing, volunteering, cooking and most
importantly
, I
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love
to

travel. My biggest goal is to travel all over the world.
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IELTS speaking Describe how you spend your free time

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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