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Talk about an article which you have read about health

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These days, as Covid 19 gets more and more intense, schools are closed and tuition is limited. So online classes are the only way to ensure that students' education is not disrupted. As my school is off, I’ve been reading health bulletins lately and I want to tell you about what I just read yesterday. Here is the whole article via the W. H. O about current Covid 19 diseases. First of all, it says common symptoms of coronary heart disease include fever, cough, tiredness, loss of taste or smell, sore throat, and headache. Severe symptoms such as shortness of breath or shortness of breath, loss of mobility, speech loss, confusion, and chest pain should be treated immediately and directed to a health facility. Second, Covid’s avoidance is explained in detail. It explains clearly by heading such as to get vaccinated, wear a mask, stay 6 feet away from others, avoid crowds and poorly ventilated spaces, test to prevent spread to others, wash your hands often, cover coughs and sneezes, clean and disinfect, monitor your health daily and so on. Third, Corona Virus is divided into categories and summarizes the effects of each one. Moreover, it also refers to the genetic mutations of a virus that refer to a variant of the original virus. And last but not least, it also explains a little bit about the new variant, Omicron disease. In conclusion, as you read this article, you will learn more about the current Covid 19 diseases and what to avoid, as well as new variants of the disease. I suggest that this article be helpful and that everyone should read it.
These days, as
Covid 19
gets
more and more intense, schools
are closed
and tuition
is limited
.
So
online classes are the
only
way to ensure that students' education is not disrupted. As my school is off, I’ve been reading health bulletins lately and I want to
tell
you about what I
just
read yesterday.

Here is the whole article via the W. H. O about
current
Covid 19
diseases
.
First of all
, it says common symptoms of coronary heart
disease
include fever, cough, tiredness, loss of taste or smell, sore throat, and headache. Severe symptoms such as shortness of breath or shortness of breath, loss of mobility, speech loss, confusion, and chest pain should
be treated
immediately and directed to a health facility. Second,
Covid
’s avoidance is
explained
in detail. It
explains
clearly
by heading such as to
get
vaccinated, wear a mask, stay
6 feet
away from others, avoid crowds and
poorly
ventilated spaces,
test
to
prevent
spread to others, wash your hands
often
, cover coughs and sneezes, clean and disinfect, monitor your health daily and
so
on. Third,
Corona Virus
is divided
into categories and summarizes the effects of each one.
Moreover
, it
also
refers to the genetic mutations of a virus that refer to a variant of the original virus. And last
but
not least, it
also
explains
a
little bit
about the new variant, Omicron disease.

In conclusion
, as you read this article, you will learn more about the
current
Covid 19
diseases
and what to avoid, as
well
as new variants of the
disease
. I suggest that this article be helpful and that everyone should read it.
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IELTS speaking Talk about an article which you have read about health

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