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Do you often go to a park? How often do you go to a park?

Do you often go to a park? How often do you go to a park? VPPOw
Well, when I’m feeling under the weather, I usually make up my mind to hang out with my close friends, visiting the park near my home is my first priority. Usually, as soon as I get some leisure time, I go to there twice a week. There are a bunch of things that I can do there, such as walking around the park, playing sports, and so on. You know, I’m have an affinity for most of sporting activities. Especially, Taekwondo is my sport favorite. But sometimes, I just pour our heart out with my friend. To be honest, the main functions of parks that is a tourist attractions. Besides, there a variety of plants in parks so it is good for the local environment. What I mean is that trees can also be regarded as air purifiers.
Well
, when I’m feeling
under the weather
, I
usually
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make
up my mind to hang out with my close friends, visiting the
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park
near my home is my
first
priority.
Usually
, as
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soon
as I
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get
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some
leisure time, I
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go to there
twice a week. There are a bunch of things that I can do there, such as walking around the
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park
, playing sports, and
so
on.
You know
, I’m
Consider using a past participle here: "had".
have
an affinity for most of sporting activities.
Especially
, Taekwondo is my sport favorite.
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But
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sometimes
, I
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just
pour our heart out with my friend. To be honest, the main functions of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parks
that is
a tourist
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "attraction"?
attractions
.
Besides
, there a variety of plants in
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parks
so
it is
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good
for the local environment. What
I mean
is that trees can
also
be regarded
as air purifiers.
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IELTS speaking Do you often go to a park? How often do you go to a park?

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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