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Talk about THE DAMS THAT CHANGED AUSTRALIA

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Inland Australia has had a problem with drought from the time of the white settlement in 1788 until today, and this is why the Snowy Mountains Scheme was conceived and founded. Before the snowy scheme a large proportion of the snowfield and Australia's highest mountains melted into the Snowy River every year. Hence, Snowy River water flowed, ultimately, into the sea, not toward the dry interior of the country, where people needed ot so desperately. This was first recognised by the Polish geologist and explored Strezlecki in 1840, who commented that there could be no development of the inland without adequate water supply. The rivers would have to be diverted if irrigation were to succeed. The scheme set out to harness water for the electricity and to divert it back to the dry inland areas for irrigation. To do this, thousands of kilometers of tunnels had to ne drilled through the mountains, and sixteen major dams and seven hydro-electric power stations built over a period of nineteen years. The first of these was Guthega power station, which was commissioned in 1954. And the last one to be finished was Tumut 3. The snowy mountains scheme was to alter the face of Australia forever. One important change was the recruitment of the people form outside Australia to work on the scheme. In 1949, while the world was still recovering form the effects of World war 2, the Australian government needed immense numbers of people to work on the Snowy. It sought labour form overseas, and 60000 of the 100000 people who worked on the scheme came from the outside the country. They came form thirty different countries: from Italy, Yugoslavia, and Germany, from sophisticated cities like Budapest, Paris and Vienna, and from tiny hamlets. These European workers left countries which had fought against each other during war, and which had vastly different cultures, and they found themselves in a country which was still defining itself. They were adventurous young men, some highly skilled, some not, and they came to place which offered enormous challenges and primitive conditions. Many were housed in tents in the early days of the scheme, although some fortunate men were placed in barracks. The food was basic, female company extremely scarce and entertainment lacking. Many new arrivals spoke only limited English, and were offered English classes after work. The men needed primarily to understand safety instructions, and safety lectures were conducted in English and other languages. In fact, a great deal of communication underground was by sigh language, especially when the conditions were noisy. The signs were peculiar to the business at hand: for instance, a thumb placed near the mouth meant water, but did not indicate whether the water was needed on the drill the man was using, or for a drink. The constant reference to the men who worked on the Snowy is appropriate because few women worked on the scheme, and those who were employed usually held office jobs. Women, however, were active in the community, and the members of the Country Women's association gave English lessons. Other English instruction was provided by the Australian Broadcasting comminsion, which ran daily broadcast to help the newcomers with the language. These circumstances could have caused great social trouble, but there were relatively few serious problems. The men worked long and hard, and many saved their money with a view to settling in Australia or returning home. At a reunion in 1999 many were happy to remember the hardships of those days, but it was all seen through a glow of achievement. This satisfaction was felt not only by the men who worked directly on the project, but by the women, many of whom had been wives and mothers during the scheme, and indicated that they had left very much part of it. The children of these couples went to school in Happy Jack, a town notable for having the highest school in Australia, and the highest birth rate. In one memorable year there were thirty babies born to the eighty families in Happy Jack. Older children went to school in Cooma, the nearest major town. The scheme is very unlikely to ne repeated. The expense of putting the power stations underground would know be prohibitive, and our current information about ecology would require a different approach to the treatment of the rivers. Other hydro-electric scheme like the Tennessee Valley Authority preceded the Snowy Mountains Scheme, and others have followed. The Snowy Mountains Scheme is the only hydro-electric scheme in the world to be totally financed form the sale of its electricity. As well as being a great engineering feat, the scheme is monument to people from around the world who dared to change their lives. Some are living and working Australia, many have retired there, some have returned to their countries of origin. Every one of them contributed to altering Australian society forever.
Inland Australia has had a problem with drought from the time of the white settlement in 1788 until
today
, and this is why the
Snowy
Mountains
Scheme
was conceived
and founded.
Before
the
snowy
scheme
a large proportion of the snowfield and Australia's highest
mountains
melted into the
Snowy
River
every year.
Hence
,
Snowy
River
water
flowed,
ultimately
, into the sea, not toward the dry interior of the
country
, where
people
needed
ot
so
desperately
. This was
first
recognised
by the Polish geologist and explored
Strezlecki
in 1840,
who
commented that there could be no development of the inland without adequate
water
supply. The
rivers
would
have to
be diverted
if irrigation were to succeed.

The
scheme
set out to harness
water
for the electricity and to divert it back to the dry inland areas for irrigation. To do this, thousands of kilometers of tunnels had to
ne
drilled through the
mountains
, and sixteen major dams and seven hydro-electric power stations built over a period of nineteen years. The
first
of these was
Guthega
power station, which
was commissioned
in 1954. And the last one to
be finished
was
Tumut
3.

The
snowy
mountains
scheme
was to alter the face of Australia forever. One
important
change
was the recruitment of the
people
form
outside Australia to work on the
scheme
. In 1949, while the
world
was
still
recovering
form
the effects of
World war 2
, the Australian
government
needed
immense numbers of
people
to work on the
Snowy
. It sought
labour
form
overseas, and 60000 of the 100000
people
who
worked on the
scheme
came from the outside the country.

They came
form
thirty
different
countries
: from Italy, Yugoslavia, and Germany, from sophisticated cities like Budapest, Paris and Vienna, and from tiny hamlets. These European workers
left
countries
which had fought against each
other
during war, and which had
vastly
different
cultures, and they found themselves in a
country
which was
still
defining itself. They were adventurous young
men
,
some
highly
skilled,
some
not, and they came to place which offered enormous challenges and primitive conditions.
Many
were housed
in tents in the early days of the
scheme
, although
some
fortunate
men
were placed
in barracks. The food was basic, female
company
extremely
scarce and entertainment lacking.

Many
new arrivals spoke
only
limited English, and
were offered
English classes after work. The
men
needed
primarily
to understand safety instructions, and safety lectures
were conducted
in English and
other
languages. In fact, a great deal of communication underground was by sigh language,
especially
when the conditions were noisy. The signs were peculiar to the business at hand:
for instance
, a thumb placed near the mouth meant
water
,
but
did not indicate whether the
water
was
needed
on the drill the
man
was using, or for a drink.

The constant reference to the
men
who
worked on the
Snowy
is appropriate
because
few women worked on the
scheme
, and those
who
were employed
usually
held office jobs. Women,
however
, were active in the community, and the members of the
Country
Women's association gave English lessons.
Other
English instruction
was provided
by the Australian Broadcasting
comminsion
, which ran daily broadcast to
help
the newcomers with the language.

These circumstances could have caused great social trouble,
but
there were
relatively
few serious problems. The
men
worked long and
hard
, and
many
saved their money with a view to settling in Australia or returning home. At a reunion in 1999
many
were happy to remember the hardships of those days,
but
it was all
seen
through a glow of achievement. This satisfaction
was felt
not
only
by the
men
who
worked
directly
on the project,
but
by the women,
many
of whom had been wives and mothers during the
scheme
, and indicated that they had
left
very
much part of it.

The children of these couples went to school in Happy Jack, a town notable for having the highest school in Australia, and the highest birth rate. In one memorable year there were thirty babies born to the eighty families in Happy Jack. Older children went to school in
Cooma
, the nearest major town.

The
scheme
is
very
unlikely to
ne
repeated. The expense of putting the power
stations
underground would
know
be prohibitive, and our
current
information about ecology would require a
different
approach to the treatment of the
rivers
.
Other
hydro-electric
scheme
like the Tennessee Valley Authority preceded the
Snowy
Mountains
Scheme
,
and others
have followed. The
Snowy
Mountains
Scheme
is the
only
hydro-electric
scheme
in the
world
to be
totally
financed
form
the sale of its electricity.

As
well
as being a great engineering feat, the
scheme
is monument to
people
from around the
world
who
dared to
change
their
lives
.
Some
are living and working Australia,
many
have retired there,
some
have returned to their
countries
of origin. Every one of them contributed to altering Australian society forever.
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