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Talk about your plans for the future

Talk about your plans for the future PWQap
Today is Monday, the second day of preparation of IELTS. Nowadays, I do mock exams that have been written by Cambridge university, consequently, they are so helpful and really have critical significance. When we talk about my schedule, it requires intense consentration due to its multitasks. To be honest I don not have any clue about what to do today, maybe I ought to reorganize my schedule, in other words, I have to reschedule my day. However, I must keep my chain up every time and treat myself when I achieve something good.
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Today
is Monday, the second day of preparation of IELTS. Nowadays, I do mock exams that have
been written
by Cambridge university,
consequently
, they are
so
helpful and
really
have critical significance. When we talk about my schedule, it requires intense
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consentration
due to its multitasks. To be honest I
Did you mean "do not"?
don not
have any clue about what to do
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today
, maybe I ought to reorganize my schedule,
in other words
, I
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have to
reschedule my day.
However
, I
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must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
my chain up every time and treat myself when I achieve something
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
.
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IELTS speaking Talk about your plans for the future

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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