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a new sport ỏ hobby you would like to take

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I have never really been that crazy about any sports apart from basketball and football. But, lately, I have been thinking about starting to play a new sport, which, I think, is interesting and gentle-manly. The name of this new sport that I am talking about is table tennis. This is not complicated, but it requires a special set of skills and movements to master the skills and play them. Well, concerning the matter of how I would start it, I would like to say that, from my perspective, the first thing, as well as the most important thing, is practicing. As I said, an impressive strength is really necessary for this one. In order to be good at playing this one, I need to improve my health a lot, especially my arms, and also my legs. Moreover, high-quality shoes are also really important, you know. If I choose fake ones, they will lead to serious injuries. An ankle flip is a typical instance. Though I often watched this game on television or in our local playground, I never played it myself. One of the reasons is that there are not many tennis courts in the area where I live. Even when I explore someone, the tables are always occupied by the players. Another reason is that the racket is so heavy for me as I can’t hold it firmly despite trying to do that a lot. On the other hand, it is slightly difficult for me to notice the speedy movement of the ball. I am also unable to move faster like the other players. A fast movement is a must to learn the sport. Well, about what help I would need. I think there are lots of things I need. First, I must find a place to play. Maybe I can play tennis at your local park, a gym, or a tennis club. Search online or ask friends where the best local courts are. Second, buying tennis supplies is essential. The racket is, of course, one of the most important aspects of tennis equipment. Apart from that, I must make the mental decision to begin, in case I give up. Last but not least, I ought to find a tennis professional to take tennis lessons

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