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a new sport ỏ hobby you would like to take

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I have never really been that crazy about any sports apart from basketball and football. But, lately, I have been thinking about starting to play a new sport, which, I think, is interesting and gentle-manly. The name of this new sport that I am talking about is table tennis. This is not complicated, but it requires a special set of skills and movements to master the skills and play them. Well, concerning the matter of how I would start it, I would like to say that, from my perspective, the first thing, as well as the most important thing, is practicing. As I said, an impressive strength is really necessary for this one. In order to be good at playing this one, I need to improve my health a lot, especially my arms, and also my legs. Moreover, high-quality shoes are also really important, you know. If I choose fake ones, they will lead to serious injuries. An ankle flip is a typical instance. Though I often watched this game on television or in our local playground, I never played it myself. One of the reasons is that there are not many tennis courts in the area where I live. Even when I explore someone, the tables are always occupied by the players. Another reason is that the racket is so heavy for me as I can’t hold it firmly despite trying to do that a lot. On the other hand, it is slightly difficult for me to notice the speedy movement of the ball. I am also unable to move faster like the other players. A fast movement is a must to learn the sport. Well, about what help I would need. I think there are lots of things I need. First, I must find a place to play. Maybe I can play tennis at your local park, a gym, or a tennis club. Search online or ask friends where the best local courts are. Second, buying tennis supplies is essential. The racket is, of course, one of the most important aspects of tennis equipment. Apart from that, I must make the mental decision to begin, in case I give up. Last but not least, I ought to find a tennis professional to take tennis lessons
I have never
really
been that crazy about any sports apart from basketball and football.
But
, lately, I have been thinking about starting to
play
a new sport, which, I
think
, is interesting and gentle-
manly
. The name of this new sport that I am talking about is table tennis. This is not complicated,
but
it requires a special set of
skills
and movements to master the
skills
and
play
them.

Well
, concerning the matter of how I would
start
it, I would like to say that, from my perspective, the
first
thing, as
well
as the most
important
thing, is practicing. As I said, an impressive strength is
really
necessary for this one. In order to be
good
at playing this one, I need to
improve
my health a lot,
especially
my arms, and
also
my legs.
Moreover
, high-quality shoes are
also
really
important
,
you know
. If I choose fake ones, they will lead to serious injuries. An ankle flip is a typical instance.

Though I
often
watched
this game on television or in our local playground, I never played it myself. One of the reasons is that there are not
many
tennis courts in the area where I
live
. Even when I explore someone, the tables are always occupied by the players. Another reason is that the racket is
so
heavy for me as I can’t hold it
firmly
despite trying to do that a lot.
On the other hand
, it is
slightly
difficult for me to notice the speedy movement of the ball. I am
also
unable to
move
faster like the other players. A
fast
movement is a
must to
learn the sport.

Well
, about what
help
I would need. I
think
there are lots of things I need.
First
, I
must
find a place to
play
. Maybe I can
play
tennis at your local park, a gym, or a tennis club. Search online or ask friends where the best local courts are. Second, buying tennis supplies is essential. The racket is,
of course
, one of the most
important
aspects of tennis equipment. Apart from that, I
must
make
the mental decision to
begin
, in case I give up. Last
but
not least, I ought to find a tennis professional to take tennis
lessons
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