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. To reduce the burden on my parents, we decided to share the household chores together equally. As you know, the man is the breadwinner. Therefore, my dad is responsible for earning money, doing heavy lifting like mending things, . . My mom is usually cooking the meals, grocery shopping, doing laundry. Because i and my brother are often at school so we do the chores less than my parents. I often folding clothes, sweeping the floor and water the garden. Besides, my brother is laying the table, fee We are so happy that we can share the chores, it is not only help my house more cleaner but also connect between all members of the family closer
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To
reduce
the burden on my parents, we decided to share the household chores together
equally
. As
you know
, the
man
is the breadwinner.
Therefore
, my dad is responsible for earning money, doing heavy lifting like mending things
, .
.


My mom is
usually
cooking the meals, grocery shopping, doing laundry.
Because
i and my brother are
often
at school
so
we do the chores less than my parents. I
often
folding clothes, sweeping the floor and water the garden.
Besides
, my brother is laying the table, fee

We are
so
happy that we can share the chores, it is not
only
help
my
house
more cleaner
but
also
connect between all members of the family closer
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2 paragraphs
117 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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