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Every person is born with a birthday. Last year's birthday was the happiest birthday of my life. I think even if I experience many other birthday parties in the future, I won't forget that day. To prepare for the party, my mother and I went to the supermarket together and bought decorations and food. It took us a day to prepare. I invite a lot of friends. My classmate, friend near my house, and loved ones. That day, I made a buffet. Plates of fresh and delicious fruit and snacks are beautifully laid out. I received a lot of gift and birthday greetings. At 11 pm, everyone started to leave. After the party was over I cleaned up with my mother and I still couldn't help smiling. This is the first time I feel the joy of my birthday. I want to thank mom for helping me have a great day.
Every person
is born
with a birthday. Last year's birthday was the happiest birthday of my life. I
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think
even if I experience
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many
other birthday parties in the future, I won't forget that day. To prepare for the party, my mother and I went to the supermarket together and
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bought
decorations and food. It took us a day to prepare. I invite
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a lot of
friends. My classmate, friend near my
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house
, and
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loved
ones. That day, I made a buffet. Plates of fresh and delicious fruit and snacks are
beautifully
laid out. I received
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a lot of
gift and birthday greetings. At 11 pm, everyone
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started
to
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leave
. After the party was over I cleaned up with my mother and I
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smiling. This is the
first
time I feel the joy of my birthday. I want to thank mom for helping me have a great day.
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IELTS speaking talk about an event you like

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