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Talk about a service which was not good and that you complained about. v.1

Talk about a service which was not good and that you complained about. v. 1
Talk about a service which was not good and that you complained about.   You should say: what service it was who provided this service why you needed it and explain what was done after you complained about it.   [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Model Answer 1: I really appreciate the time you have given me to brainstorm and talk about a service which was not up to my expectation and for which I complained. Well, I was/am never really much of a complaining person even at a time when my minimum expectation is not met. But, this is life, and the reality is we do care about our lives no matter how hard we try not to. Anyway, in the last fall, I was celebrating my friend’s birthday at a nearby restaurant of my choice. I was told that the restaurant had some of the best grilled-fish in the town, and I happened to just love grilled fish. After cutting the cake and wishing our birthday boy, we were finally ready to eat the foods, which we had asked the restaurant manager to arrange at least a week ago of our birthday party. Our food arrived as per the schedule, and we started to think of eating them one bite at a time slowly, slowly to offer ourselves the “ultimate taste” of a grilled fish except, of course, that some of us stopped immediately after taking the first bite. What might have caused such abrupt interruption, we wondered? Well, in no time, it was revealed that some of the fishes had some foul smell coming out of them. I was quite stunned after learning about the embarrassing news because, after all, it was me who convinced my friends to come to the restaurant. I rushed to the restaurant manager immediately and complained to him about the food. The manager begged for some times to learn what might have actually transpired in the kitchen. The manager came back in a few minutes and tried to explain to me that the kitchen staffs were not aware of any foul smell and that the fishes were just fine with their natural flavour after grill. But, I wasn’t exactly in a mood then to allow him any space for manoeuvring the situation that had embarrassed me and my friend (the birthday boy) big time. I even threatened to sue the restaurant for causing us such embarrassment. It was then the restaurant manager felt compelled to come to a respectable settlement to save our faces. According to the settlement agreement, the restaurant had to serve us with “sirloin beef steak” at half of its original price with free soft drinks (Coca-cola, sprite etc) for all 15 people. I was glad that the settlement worked for both parties without causing any major disconcert between us. Sample Answer 2: I am really glad that you have given me an opportunity to talk about this topic. In fact, being able to talk about my negative experience with a service provider in my hometown would shed some of the distress I have had felt for the last few weeks. It is a fairly recent experience and I thank you once again for letting me talk about it. Two months ago I contacted a local AC repair service provider, called MR Fixer. My air conditioner malfunctioned and it was producing a loud noise, and the cooling system was inadequate considering the outside temperature. So I decided to have it fixed. I found this agency online and they had a wide range of services. As soon as I called them, they assured me that a technician, who is an expert, would contact me and provide me with the required service at my home. After I gave more details about the problems and the AC that require fixing, they instructed me to pay $70 upfront as a service charge. I paid the amount online the very next hour but unfortunately, the technician did not call me within the next 48 hours. When I contacted the agency again, someone called me an hour later but did not come to my home as promised. Next day, he showed up and took an hour to fix the issue with the AC. He demanded an additional $15 as his transportation cost which I paid with dismay. Shockingly, the AC was not properly fixed and it started making the noise the very next day. The cooling system was working as expected but the noise was even louder this time. I called the service provider and had to call back several times to find the person who booked my service request - the first sign of terrible customer service. I explained to him the whole scenario and told him why I am complaining. Initially, he did not cooperate with me and asked me to talk to the technician instead. When I explained that I would rather go to the Consumer Rights Protection Agency and lodge a written complain, he revealed that the technicians were not their permanent employees and the agency can't do anything about it. I was totally frustrated with the experience and vowed never to take their service again. Instead of taking legal actions, I wrote some negative reviews about the company in different online forums and many people responded to the reviews. Someone from the company called me a week ago and told me that if I delete all those negative reviews, they might refund my $70! That was another sign that the whole agency is unreliable and nefarious.
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Talk
about a
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service
which was not
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good
and that you complained about.
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You should say: what
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service
it was
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who
provided this
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service
why you needed it and
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explain
what
was done
after you complained about it.
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[You will
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have to
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talk
about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]


Model Answer 1: I
really
appreciate the
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time
you have
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given
me to brainstorm and
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talk
about a
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service
which was not up to my expectation and for which I complained.

Well
, I was/am never
really
much of a complaining person even at a
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time
when my minimum expectation is not met.
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But
, this is life, and the reality is we do care about our
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lives
no matter how
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hard
we try not to.
Anyway
, in the last fall, I was celebrating my friend’s birthday at a nearby
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restaurant
of my choice. I was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
that the
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restaurant
had
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some
of the best grilled-fish in the town, and I happened to
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just
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love
grilled fish. After cutting the cake and wishing our birthday boy, we were
finally
ready to eat the foods, which we had asked the
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restaurant
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manager
to arrange at least a week ago of our birthday party.

Our food arrived as per the schedule, and we
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started
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
of eating them one bite at a
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time
slowly
,
slowly
to offer ourselves the “ultimate taste” of a grilled fish except,
of course
, that
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some
of us
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stopped
immediately after taking the
first
bite. What might have caused such abrupt interruption, we wondered?
Well
, in no
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time
, it
was revealed
that
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some of the
fishes had
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some
foul smell coming out of them. I was quite stunned after learning about the embarrassing news
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because
,
after all
, it was me
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who
convinced my friends to
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come
to the restaurant.

I rushed to the
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restaurant
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manager
immediately and complained to him about the food. The
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manager
begged for
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some
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times
to learn what might have
actually
transpired in the kitchen. The
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manager
came back in a few minutes and tried to
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explain
to me that the kitchen staffs were not aware of any foul smell and that the fishes were
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just
fine with their natural
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flavour
after grill.
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But
, I wasn’t exactly in a mood then to
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allow
him any space for
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manoeuvring
the situation that had embarrassed me and my friend (the birthday boy)
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big
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time
. I even threatened to sue the
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restaurant
for causing us such embarrassment.

It was then the
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restaurant
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manager
felt compelled to
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come
to a respectable settlement to save our faces. According to the settlement agreement, the
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restaurant
had to serve us with “sirloin beef steak” at half of its original price with free soft drinks (Coca-cola, sprite etc) for all 15
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people
. I was glad that the settlement worked for both parties without causing any major disconcert between us.

Sample Answer 2: I am
really
glad that you have
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given
me an opportunity to
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talk
about this topic. In fact, being able to
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talk
about my
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negative
experience with a
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service
provider in my hometown would shed
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some of the
distress I have had felt for the last few weeks. It is a
fairly
recent experience and I thank you once again for letting me
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talk
about it.

Two months ago I contacted a local AC repair
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service
provider, called MR Fixer. My air conditioner malfunctioned and it was producing a loud noise, and the cooling system was inadequate considering the outside temperature.
So
I decided to have it
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fixed
. I found this
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agency
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online and
they had a wide range of
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services
. As
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soon
as I called them, they assured me that a
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technician
,
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who
is an expert, would contact me and provide me with the required
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service
at my home. After I gave more
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details
about the problems and the AC that require fixing, they instructed me to pay $70 upfront as a
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service
charge.

I paid the amount online the
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very
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next
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hour
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but
unfortunately, the
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technician
did not call me within the
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next
48
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hours
. When I contacted the
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agency
again, someone called me an
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hour
later
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but
did not
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come
to my home as promised.
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Next
day, he
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showed
up and took an
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hour
to
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fix
the issue with the AC. He demanded an additional $15 as his transportation cost which I paid with dismay.

Shockingly
, the AC was not
properly
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fixed
and it
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started
making the noise the
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very
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next
day. The cooling system was working as
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expected
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but
the noise was even louder this
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time
. I called the
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service
provider and had to call back several
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times
to find the person
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who
booked my
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service
request
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
the
first
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sign
of terrible customer service.

I
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explained
to him the whole scenario and
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told
him why I am complaining.
Initially
, he did not cooperate with me and asked me to
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talk
to the
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technician
instead
. When I
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explained
that I would
rather
go to the Consumer Rights Protection
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Agency
and lodge a written
Did you mean "complaint"?
complain
, he revealed that the
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technicians
were not their permanent employees and the
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agency
can't do anything about it. I was
totally
frustrated with the experience and vowed never to take their
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service
again.
Instead
of taking legal actions, I wrote
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some
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negative
reviews about the
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company
in
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different
online forums and
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many
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people
responded to the reviews. Someone from the
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company
called me a week ago and
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told
me that if I delete all those
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negative
reviews, they might refund my $70! That was another
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sign
that the whole
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agency
is unreliable and nefarious.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
60Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS speaking Talk about a service which was not good and that you complained about. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
11 paragraphs
959 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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