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Something you have started recently which is good for your health. v.1

Something you have started recently which is good for your health. v. 1
Something you have started recently which is good for your health. You should say: what it is when you have started it why you have started doing it and explain how it is good for your health.   [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Model Answer 1: When I read the “phrase” for the first at my elementary/primary school, I didn’t quite understand what it really meant. The “phrase” revisited me many times during my high school and college years as well, but I still didn’t fully appreciate its significance and appeal to our overall well-being. It actually took an excruciating stomach pain for me to fully understand and appreciate a phrase as “evergreen” as “Heath is Wealth” when my doctor advised me a month ago to walk at least 30 minutes a day in order to ensure better digestion for my suffering stomach. And another 30 minutes if I wanted to get rid of that extra fat which I have amassed at the bottom of my belly! Since then, I started “jogging’ a little even though my body doesn’t quite like to go along with that idea. I would like to thank you for this nice cue card topic. I am persistent with the routine of a 30-minute “walk” daily. Does walking help our digestive system? The answer is a resounding “yes’, and I have figured it out already after only a couple of weeks of jogging. In fact, the result is more encouraging than what I felt after eating medicines for months. My gastric problem was under control while developing a bit more appetite for foods. In fact, jogging is a very good aerobic exercise as it can improve our blood flow to the digestive tract and speed up metabolism while regulating weight and relieving stress at the same time, which can all then contribute to a healthy and well-functioning digestive system. And once, we are blessed with a perfectly-functioning digestive system, it is highly unlikely that we will attract any digestive diseases such as constipation, gastric or liver problems. Another health benefit of jogging is that it will help burn our unnecessary body fat by using it as “fuel” for tone muscle, which will, of course, result in extra strength and more polished appearance. I am glad that I have started running! Model Answer 2: Thank you for this interesting topic. I have recently started going to a gymnasium and this is something I have been planning to do for a long. However, I am happy that I am finally doing it and I believe this is something that will bring numerous benefits to me.   For more than a year, I have been planning to take some outdoor activities to remain fit. I am already in my early thirties and due to my work pressure in the office, I hardly get time to play outdoor sports or walk in the morning or in the evening. I realised how important it is for me to do some sort of exercise considering my age and in the middle of the last January, I became a member of a local gymnasium. After I started visiting the gym each day and doing exercise for about an hour, I have lost more than 8 pounds of my body weight in just three months. I was slightly overweight before I started the gym. After I shed some weight, I now have a good body mass index. The decision to go to the gym every day was a great one as it has not only helped me lose some of my body weight and remain fit but also helped me to adopt a balanced diet and a healthier lifestyle. I wake up before 6. 00 am as I need to go to the gym before 6. 45 am and as a result, I go to bed early at night. The gym instructor has recommended me a dietary change and this is also helping me a lot. Since I start my day with some physical exercise, I drink more water each day and feel more energetic throughout the day. I am hoping to continue this routine and expecting more positive changes to live a healthy life.
Something you have
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started
recently which is
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good
for your health. You should say: what it is when you have
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started
it why you have
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started
doing it and
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explain
how it is
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good
for your health.
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[You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one
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minute
to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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Model Answer 1: When I read the “phrase” for the
first
at my elementary/primary school, I didn’t quite understand what it
really
meant. The “phrase” revisited me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
times during my high school and college years as
well
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I
still
didn’t
fully
appreciate its significance and appeal to our
overall
well
-being. It
actually
took an excruciating stomach pain for me to
fully
understand and appreciate a phrase as “evergreen” as “Heath is Wealth” when my doctor advised me a month ago to walk at least 30 minutes a day in order to ensure better digestion for my suffering stomach. And another 30 minutes if I wanted to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
rid of that extra
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fat
which I have amassed at the bottom of my belly! Since then, I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
started
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
“jogging’
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
even though
my
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body
doesn’t quite like to go along with that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
. I would like to thank you for this nice cue card topic.

I am persistent with the routine of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
30-minute
“walk” daily. Does walking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
our digestive system? The answer is a resounding “yes’, and I have figured it out already after
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
a couple of weeks of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jogging
. In fact, the result is more encouraging than what I felt after
In a medical context, people take or swallow medicines. If they eat medicines, it is a mistake. Did you mean "taking" or "swallowing"?
eating
medicines for months. My gastric problem was under control while developing a bit more appetite for foods. In fact,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jogging
is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
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good
aerobic
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exercise
as it can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
our blood flow to the digestive tract and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
speed up
metabolism while regulating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weight
and relieving
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
at the same time, which can all then contribute to a healthy and
well
-functioning digestive system.

And once, we
are blessed
with a
perfectly
-functioning digestive system, it is
highly
unlikely that we will attract any digestive diseases such as constipation, gastric or liver problems. Another health benefit of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jogging
is that it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
burn our unnecessary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
body
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fat
by using it as “fuel” for tone muscle, which will,
of course
, result in extra strength and more polished appearance. I am glad that I have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
started
running!

Model Answer 2: Thank you for this interesting topic. I have recently
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
started
going to a gymnasium and this is something I have been planning to do for a long.
However
, I am happy that I am
finally
doing it and I believe this is something that will bring numerous benefits to me.
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
 
For more than a year, I have been planning to take
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
outdoor activities to remain fit. I am already in my early thirties and due to my work pressure in the office, I hardly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
time to play outdoor sports or walk in the morning or in the evening. I
Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.
realised
how
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important
it is for me to do
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some
sort of
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exercise
considering my age and in the middle of the last January, I became a member of a local gymnasium. After I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
started
visiting the
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gym
each day and doing
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exercise
for about an hour, I have lost more than
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8 pounds
of my
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body
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weight
in
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just
three months. I was
slightly
overweight
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before
I
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started
the
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gym
. After I shed
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some
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weight
, I
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now
have a
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good
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body
mass index. The decision to go to the
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gym
every day was a great one as it has not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
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helped
me lose
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some
of my
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body
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weight
and remain fit
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but
also
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helped
me to adopt a balanced diet and a healthier lifestyle. I wake up
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before
6. 00 am as I need to go to the
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gym
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before
6. 45 am and
as a result
, I go to bed early at night. The
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gym
instructor has recommended me a dietary
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change
and this is
also
helping me a lot. Since I
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start
my day with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
physical
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exercise
, I drink more water each day and feel more energetic throughout the day. I am hoping to continue this routine and expecting more
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positive
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changes
to
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live
a healthy life.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Something you have started recently which is good for your health. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
734 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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