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Describe something kind that someone did for you. v.1

Describe something kind that someone did for you. v. 1
Describe something kind that someone did for you. You should say: who this person was where and when it happened what s/he did for you explain how you felt about it.     [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Model Answer 1: I am glad to have such a nice topic to talk about and I would like to thank you for the opportunity. In our life, we often face challenges and obstacles that are tough to overcome all by ourselves. A little help from others can save the day and no matter how much we criticise the human race for being self-centred, we can't deny the selfless acts that we are often offered by others, even sometimes by complete strangers. Thus a few months ago someone named Khalif Ashraf did something truly kind for which I will always remember this benevolent soul. I was in Penang island in Malaysia last year with my wife and my four years old daughter on our holiday. As soon as we arrived on the island from the Muscat International Airport, we realised that the island was getting ready for the Chinese New Year and due to this, it was packed with the tourists. We hired a taxi and the driver was a local resident who introduced himself as Khalif Ashraf and he was in his mid-thirties. We realised his friendly attitude as soon as we got in his car. It was already 10. 00 pm and my daughter and wife were very tired. I had a list of a few hotels to stay in and told the driver to take us to these hotels. Unfortunately, none of the hotels had any room they could offer us. Things were getting disordered and we were hoping to get a room by any mean. Mr Ashraf, our taxi driver, understood our dilemma and offered to take us to a few hotels he knew personally. Initially, I was confused as my previous experience taught me that taxi drivers often get commissions by bringing guests to below-standard hotels which charge a hefty amount. However, I agreed to his proposition and he did a remarkable job by finding a nice hotel for us at a comparatively cheaper price. I was taken aback when he told the hotel manager to give us a 20% discount for which he used one of his identification cards. It was completely unexpected and so kind an act that I will never forget it. I felt more perplexed when he denied taking the taxi rent for the extra distance he drove us to this hotel. It was a great example of kindness and empathy. He even called me the next day and met us with a few gifts for my daughter. This event was an acute reminder for me to trust humanity. Model Answer 2: Getting stranded in the middle of a night out of nowhere is certainly not a good feeling when you are alone. But, that’s exactly what happened to me about a couple of years ago when I was coming back to my home in my old 4-door sedan car on a late evening after finishing some important works at my company factory. The factory was about a 2-hour drive from my home which I needed to visit at least once in a month or so. But, on that day, when I decided to hit the road after finishing my work, it was already 10: 00 pm. I felt really tired after finishing my work. So, I decided to take a little rest on the roadside in my old car which, as I think of it now, wasn’t exactly a very good idea as I fell asleep. Not sure, how long I had slept, but when I woke up, it was about 12: 20 pm and I needed to drive at least another hour or so to reach my home. However, after driving probably about 20 minutes, the car started to act on me and then eventually coming to a complete stop. I tried to fix the car, but I couldn’t really do anything about it as it looked like the car engine was dead, leaving me wondering in a place with no home or stores nearby in sight. I called my car “towing” company, but what they told me wasn’t really very encouraging as it would have taken them at least 40 minutes to reach me. So, anyway, I just decided to wait inside my car while asking for a ride occasionally, but nobody was really in a mood to help me out. Then, suddenly, came my ‘saviour” just when I was getting ready to spend the rest of the night inside my “dead” car. Introducing himself as Mr. Raymond, he was kind enough to ask me whether I needed him to help me fix my car, or I needed him to give me a ride. I requested him to rather give me a ride after explaining to him about my dead car engine. He gladly obliged. Not knowing where he was from, or what kind of person he really was (I guess, it was the fear of “unknown”), I decided to accept his help, leaving my car on the road by itself for it to be “towed” later on. Anyway, as if he could read what was really going in my mind, he decided to ease my tension by providing me a bit more details about him and his family. When we arrived at my home, it was about 1: 00 am at night. I offered Raymond to spend the rest of the night at my place, as it was really late for anybody to go out, but he declined. I didn’t really know much about Mr. Raymond as we didn’t really talk much during our little “journey”. But whatever I knew about him after that little chit chat, it was enough for me to conclude that he was ready to help a person in distress any time of the day or night. I felt like I just couldn’t thank him enough for helping me on a night when nobody was really willing to do so. In fact, I thought, it was because of people like Raymond this world was still a safer place for us to live. At the end, when he was ready to hit the road, I requested him to let me know if he ever needed any help not because what he did for me, but because without some “kind” people like Raymond among us, the entire “human race” probably would have been “lost” in its complicated journey.
Describe
something
kind
that someone did for you. You should say: who this person was where and when it happened what s/he did for you
explain
how you
felt
about it.
   
[You will
have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one
minute
to
think
about what you are going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]


Model Answer 1: I am glad to have such a nice topic to talk about and I would like to thank you for the opportunity.

In our life, we
often
face challenges and obstacles that are tough to overcome all by ourselves. A
little
help
from others can save the day and no matter how much we
criticise
the human race for being
self-centred
, we can't deny the selfless acts that we are
often
offered by others, even
sometimes
by complete strangers.
Thus
a few months ago someone named
Khalif
Ashraf did something
truly
kind
for which I will always remember this benevolent soul.

I was in
Penang
island in Malaysia last
year
with my wife and my four years
old
daughter on our holiday. As
soon
as we
arrived on
the island from the Muscat International Airport, we
realised
that the island was getting
ready
for the Chinese New
Year
and due to this, it
was packed
with the tourists. We hired a
taxi
and the
driver
was a local resident who introduced himself as
Khalif
Ashraf and
he was in his mid-thirties. We
realised
his friendly attitude as
soon
as we
got
in his
car
. It was already 10. 00 pm and my daughter and wife were
very
tired. I had a list of a few
hotels
to stay in and
told
the
driver
to take us to these
hotels
. Unfortunately, none of the
hotels
had any room they could offer us. Things were getting
disordered and
we were hoping to
get
a room by any mean.

Mr Ashraf, our
taxi
driver
, understood our dilemma and offered to take us to a few
hotels
he knew
personally
.
Initially
, I
was confused
as my previous experience taught me that
taxi
drivers
often
get
commissions by bringing guests to below-standard
hotels
which charge a hefty amount.
However
, I
agreed
to his
proposition and
he did a remarkable job by finding a nice
hotel
for us at a
comparatively
cheaper price. I
was taken
aback when he
told
the
hotel
manager to give us a 20% discount for which he
used
one of his identification cards. It was completely unexpected and
so
kind
an act that I will never forget it.

I
felt
more perplexed when he denied taking the
taxi
rent for the extra distance he drove us to this
hotel
. It was a great example of kindness and empathy. He even called me the
next
day and met us with a few gifts for my daughter. This
event
was an acute reminder for me to trust humanity.

Model Answer 2: Getting stranded in the middle of a
night
out of nowhere is
certainly
not a
good
feeling when you are alone.
But
, that’s exactly what happened to me about a couple of years ago when I was coming back to my home in my
old
4-door sedan
car
on a late evening after finishing
some
important
works at my
company
factory. The factory was about a 2-hour drive from my home which I
needed
to visit at least once in a month or
so
.
But
, on that day, when I
decided
to hit the road after finishing my work, it was already 10: 00 pm.

I
felt
really tired
after finishing my work.
So
, I
decided
to take a
little
rest on the roadside in my
old
car
which, as I
think
of it
now
, wasn’t exactly a
very
good
idea
as I fell asleep. Not sure, how long I had slept,
but
when I woke up, it was about 12: 20 pm and I
needed
to drive at least another hour or
so
to reach my home.
However
, after driving
probably
about 20 minutes, the
car
started
to act on me and then
eventually
coming to a complete
stop
. I tried to
fix
the
car
,
but
I couldn’t
really
do anything about it as it looked like the
car
engine was dead, leaving me wondering in a place with no home or stores nearby in sight. I called my
car
“towing”
company
,
but
what they
told
me wasn’t
really
very
encouraging as it would have taken them at least 40 minutes to reach me.
So
,
anyway
, I
just
decided
to wait inside my
car
while asking for a ride
occasionally
,
but
nobody was
really
in a mood to
help
me out. Then,
suddenly
, came my ‘
saviour
just
when I was getting
ready
to spend the rest of the
night
inside my “dead” car.

Introducing himself as Mr. Raymond, he was
kind
enough
to ask me whether I
needed
him to
help
me
fix
my
car
, or I
needed
him to give me a ride. I requested him to
rather
give me a ride after explaining to him about my dead
car
engine. He
gladly
obliged. Not knowing where he was from, or what
kind
of person he
really
was (
I guess
, it was the fear of “unknown”), I
decided
to accept his
help
, leaving my
car
on the road by itself for it to be “towed” later on.
Anyway
, as if he could read what was
really
going in my mind, he
decided
to
ease
my tension by providing me a bit more
details
about him and his family. When we arrived at my home, it was about 1: 00 am at
night
. I offered Raymond to spend the rest of the
night
at my place, as it was
really
late for anybody to go out,
but
he declined.

I didn’t
really
know much about Mr. Raymond as we didn’t
really
talk much during our
little
“journey”.
But
whatever I knew about him after that
little
chit chat
, it was
enough
for me
to conclude
that he was
ready
to
help
a person in distress any time of the day or
night
. I
felt
like I
just
couldn’t thank him
enough
for helping me on a
night
when nobody was
really
willing to do
so
. In fact, I
thought
, it was
because
of
people
like Raymond this world was
still
a safer place for us to
live
. At the
end
, when he was
ready
to hit the road, I requested him to
let
me know if he ever
needed
any
help
not
because
what he did for me,
but
because
without
some
“kind”
people
like Raymond among us, the entire “human race”
probably
would have been “lost” in its complicated journey.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
81Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Mistakes
Speak a new language so that the world will be a new world.
Rumi

IELTS speaking Describe something kind that someone did for you. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
10 paragraphs
1134 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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