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speak about a party that you had been

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NA: It’s been a long time since we last met 5 years ago. Why don’t we hold a party for an anniversary? KN: That's a good idea. Why not? BN: What can we start now? LM: where will we hold it? At home? Or a restaurant? KN: It should be at the restaurant. It’ll be more widely and more comfortable. BN: Yea. I’d say that I agree with Ngan. When will we hold it? NA: How about Sunday? LM: No, Saturday is better, we’ll have more time. NA, BN, KN: Agree. NA: What time is most reasonable? KN: About six to ten p. m is a good time. BN: No, that’s our anniversary party. We should make it an unforgettable celebration. Seven p. m to overnight is a good choice. KN: Ohh, that’s a good idea. We don’t know when we will have such an opportunity again. LM: I have a suggestion. You guys can come to my house to celebrate this party. NA: What can we do in your house? I don’t want this party to be boring. LM: haha. don’t worry, my house has lots of space. It also has a swimming pool, karaoke, colorful lights to paylak, board games, . . . ( and more). NA, KN, BN: oh, what a good suggestion. KN: How about night party food? NA: hmm. We'll go to the supermarket to buy some snacks and drinks.
NA: It’s been a long time since we last met 5 years ago. Why don’t we hold a
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party
for an anniversary?

KN: That's a
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good
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idea
. Why not?

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BN
: What can we
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?

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LM
: where will we hold it? At home? Or a restaurant?

KN: It should be at the restaurant. It’ll be more
widely
and more comfortable.

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BN
: Yea. I’d say that I
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agree
with
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Ngan
. When will we hold it?

NA: How about Sunday?

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LM
: No, Saturday is better, we’ll have more time.

NA,
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BN
, KN:
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Agree
.

NA: What time is most reasonable?

KN: About six to ten p. m is a
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time.

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BN
: No, that’s our anniversary
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party
. We should
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make
it an unforgettable celebration. Seven p. m to overnight is a
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good
choice.

KN:
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Ohh
, that’s a
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idea
. We don’t know when we will have such an opportunity again.

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LM
: I have a suggestion. You guys can
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come
to my
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to celebrate this party.

NA: What can we do in your
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? I don’t want this
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to be boring.

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LM
: haha.
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don
’t worry, my
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house
has lots of space. It
also
has a swimming pool, karaoke, colorful lights to
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paylak
, board games
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NA, KN,
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: oh, what a
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suggestion.

KN: How about night
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food?

NA: hmm. We'll go to the supermarket to
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IELTS speaking speak about a party that you had been

Speaking
  American English
19 paragraphs
235 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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