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Who has had the greatest impact on my life?

Who has had the greatest impact on my life? yxNm3
When I think of this question, the first person I think of is my former math teacher Uuganbat. He taught me his lessons for 6 years. He not only taught math but he also taught important life lessons. His golden 4 rules are: 1. Always be patient. The one who is patient never loses and the one who is impatient never wins. 2. Always be grateful for your teachers. They are the reason why you are succeeding. 3. Learn new skills every now and then. You’ll become a more powerful person as you master more skills rather than just gaining knowledge. 4. Only tell the truth of the other person when you two are alone. Never degrade your friend when you are surrounded by other people. He is more than an academic teacher; he is a holistic guide. During the 6 years of being a student of the teacher Uuganbat, I developed my academic knowledge greatly, became interested in studying various subjects, found the mindset that you succeed as much as you aspire, and most importantly, I have been following his golden rules.
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1. Always be patient. The one who is patient never loses and the one who is impatient never wins.

2. Always be grateful for your
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. They are the reason why you are succeeding.

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the truth of the other person when you two are alone. Never degrade your friend when you
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He is more than an academic
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; he is a holistic guide. During the 6 years of being a student of the
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IELTS speaking Who has had the greatest impact on my life?

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183 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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