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a party that you have participate in

a party that you have participate in yxNKM
NA: Hallo, Ngoc where are you now? I’m at the coffee shop now. BN: I’m sending my motorbike, wait for me a minute. (background nằm nhà ngủ) LM: Hello, long time no see. NA: Hi Minh, it’s been a long time when we last met. LM: Are you okay these days? How are you doing? NA: I’m a bit tired these days. KN: You guys come so early. The road was a bit congested so I was a little late. NA: Ngoc just said that she was parking but she hasn’t appeared until now. LM: We know that she is always late. A FEW MOMENTS LATER BN: Everyone is here. Sorry that I have been stuck in a traffic jam. KN: Yeah, just 30 minutes. BN: Hihi, sorry. LM: Don’t mind. We are all here. So, Nanh why did you call us out here? NA: It’s been a long time since we last met 5 years ago. Why don’t we hold a celebration for an anniversary? KN: That's a great idea. Why not? BN: What can we start now LM: where will we hold it? At home? Or a restaurant? KN: It should be at the restaurant. It’ll be more widely and more comfortable. BN: Yea. I’d say that I agree with Ngan. When will we hold it? NA: How about Sunday? LM: No, Saturday is better, we’ll have more time. NA, BN, KN: Agree. NA: What time is most reasonable? KN: About six to ten p. m is a satisfying time. BN: No, that’s our anniversary celebration. We should make it an unforgettable celebration. Seven p. m to overnight is a good choice. KN: Ohh, that’s a good idea. We don’t know when we will have such an opportunity again. LM: I have a suggestion. You guys can come to my house to celebrate this party. NA: What can we do in your house? I don’t want this party to be boring. LM: haha. Don’t worry, my house has lots of space. It also has a swimming pool, karaoke, colorful lights to palak, board games. . . (and more). NA, KN, BN: oh, what a satisfying suggestion. KN: How about the night party food? NA: hmm. We'll go to the supermarket to buy a number of snacks and drinks. Everyone ok cùng nhau đi siêu thị KN: Don’t be late, especially Bảo Ngọc LM: See you later.
NA:
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Hallo
,
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Ngoc
where are you
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now
? I’m at the coffee shop
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now
.

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BN
: I’m sending my motorbike, wait for me a minute. (background
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nằm
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nhà
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ngủ
)

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LM
: Hello, long
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time
no
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see
.

NA: Hi
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Minh
, it’s been a long
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time
when we last met.

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LM
: Are you okay these days? How are you doing?

NA: I’m a bit tired these days.

KN: You guys
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come
so
early. The road was a bit congested
so
I was a
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little
late.

NA:
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Ngoc
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just
said that she was parking
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but
she hasn’t appeared until
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now
.

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LM
: We know that she is always late.

A FEW MOMENTS LATER

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BN
: Everyone is here. Sorry that I have
been stuck
in a traffic jam.

KN: Yeah,
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just
30 minutes.

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BN
:
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Hihi
, sorry.

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LM
: Don’t mind. We are all here.
So
,
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Nanh
why did you call us out here?

NA: It’s been a long
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time
since we last met 5 years ago. Why don’t we hold a celebration for an anniversary?

KN: That's a great
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idea
. Why not?

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BN
: What can we
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start
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now


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LM
: where will we hold it? At home? Or a restaurant?

KN: It should be at the restaurant. It’ll be more
widely
and more comfortable.

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BN
: Yea. I’d say that I
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agree
with
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Ngan
. When will we hold it?

NA: How about Sunday?

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LM
: No, Saturday is better, we’ll have more time.

NA,
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BN
, KN:
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Agree
.

NA: What
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time
is most reasonable?

KN: About six to ten p. m is a satisfying time.

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BN
: No, that’s our anniversary celebration. We should
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make
it an unforgettable celebration. Seven p. m to overnight is a
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good
choice.

KN:
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Ohh
, that’s a
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good
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idea
. We don’t know when we will have such an opportunity again.

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LM
: I have a suggestion. You guys can
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come
to my
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house
to celebrate this party.

NA: What can we do in your
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house
? I don’t want this party to be boring.

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LM
: haha. Don’t worry, my
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house
has lots of space. It
also
has a swimming pool, karaoke, colorful lights to
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palak
, board games.
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.
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.
(and more).

NA, KN,
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BN
: oh, what a satisfying suggestion.

KN: How about the night party food?

NA: hmm. We'll go to the supermarket to
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buy
a number of snacks and drinks.

Everyone ok
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cùng
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nhau
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đi
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siêu
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thị


KN: Don’t be late,
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Bảo
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Ngọc


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LM
:
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See
you later.
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IELTS speaking a party that you have participate in

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