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No Experience about Ships

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Generally speaking, most people where I live don’t have any experiences about being on a ship. Although here considered a coastal town, there is no harbor or port near the beach. Maybe, the main reason boils down to this: the town has focused on tourism, not transition of cargo. Another reason comes back the sea. As a matter of fact, Caspian Sea, which is situated near my town, is the widest lake on the earth. Nevertheless, it doesn’t have any large-scale river as a pass to the oceans. Therefore, it seems it could be expected that almost no one experienced being on ships.
Generally
speaking, most
people
where I
live
don’t have any experiences about being on a ship. Although here considered a coastal town, there is no harbor or port near the beach. Maybe, the main reason
boils down to
this: the town has focused on tourism, not transition of cargo. Another reason
comes
back the sea. As a matter of fact, Caspian Sea, which
is situated
near my town, is the widest lake on the earth.
Nevertheless
, it doesn’t have any large-scale river as a pass to the oceans.
Therefore
, it seems it could be
expected
that almost no one experienced being on ships.
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103 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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