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What do you like most about your home town/city?

What do you like most about your home town/city? aAMPw
What do you like most about your home town/city? - Mostly I like parks, people and culture. [Why? ] - There is city park just 5 minutes far away from center. Also, Taukbahçe and Gërmia national park located in peripherical eastern part of Prishtina, with wonderful nature views. In my home town people are young, kind, polite and generous. We have good interactions between traditional and modern laws. The majority of the population is young, who are open to Western cultures and modern trends. Is your home town/city a popular place for tourists to visit? - Usually, we have few tourists, but their number is small. [Why/Why not? ] - I think this is because they do not have enough information, or they are misinformed about cultural heritage and beautiful nature. Do you think your home town/city had changed much in recent years? - Actually, a lot of changes happened last 20 years. [Why/Why not? ] - There were big investments on new building, roads and urban infrastructure.
What do you like most about your home town/city?

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Mostly
I like parks,
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people
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There is city park
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5 minutes far away from center.
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Taukbahçe
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Gërmia
national park located in
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peripherical
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Prishtina
, with wonderful nature views. In my home town
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people
are young, kind, polite and generous. We have
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interactions between traditional and modern laws. The majority of the population is young, who are open to Western cultures and modern trends.

Is your home town/city a popular place for tourists to visit?

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Usually
, we have few tourists,
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their number is
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[Why/Why not?
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I
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they do not have
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enough
information, or they
are misinformed
about cultural heritage and
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beautiful
nature.

Do you
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think
your home town/city had
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changed
much in recent years?

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Actually
,
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a lot of
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changes
happened last 20 years.

[Why/Why not?
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There were
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big
investments on new building, roads and urban infrastructure.
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IELTS speaking What do you like most about your home town/city?

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9 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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