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Sometimes people think about other's Rijk, besides they talk about that if the people leave the work or authority does not pay salary for one month they can't make a living. How stupid they are! Why do the arrogant people not think that our Rijk comes from our omnipotent Allah and it does not come from their direction? Finally, I have a couple of questions for them. Why do you think that? What do you think about yourself? Message for them: Allah is the best provider. Mind it.

Sometimes people think about other's Rijk, besides they talk about that if the people leave the work or authority does not pay salary for one month they can't make a living. How stupid they are! Why do the arrogant people not think that our Rijk comes from our omnipotent Allah and it does not come from their direction? Finally, I have a couple of questions for them. Why do you think that? What do you think about yourself? Message for them: Allah is the best provider. Mind it. XEgqw
Sometimes people think about other's Rijk, besides they talk about that if the people leave the work or authority does not pay salary for one month they can't make a living. How stupid they are! Why do the arrogant people not think that our Rijk comes from our omnipotent Allah and it does not come from their direction? Finally, I have a couple of questions for them. Why do you think that? What do you think about yourself? Message for them: Allah is the best provider. Mind it.
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IELTS speaking Sometimes people think about other's Rijk, besides they talk about that if the people leave the work or authority does not pay salary for one month they can't make a living. How stupid they are! Why do the arrogant people not think that our Rijk comes from our omnipotent Allah and it does not come from their direction? Finally, I have a couple of questions for them. Why do you think that? What do you think about yourself? Message for them: Allah is the best provider. Mind it.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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