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I’d like to tell you about the washer that is very important to my family. It’s an Electrolux from Germany, a country well-known for making top-notch electronic equipment. We intended to buy a Samsung, but then we changed our mind and decided on the Electrolux. We use the washer every day, sometimes twice or three times a day when there’s a bunch of dirty clothes. It has a large capacity and is very powerful. If my memory serves, it can hold up to 10 kilos. And what I particularly like about this washer is the wide range of clothing it can wash and that it makes almost no noise when it’s working. My father bought this washer two years ago when the previous one broke down. It was just wear and tear. ▶ I think doing the laundry with a washer would be much less labor-intensive and time-saving. Thanks to it, there’s no need to bend our backs to do the washing by hand. What you need to do is just put the clothes in the washer, hit the correct buttons, and wait for about 45 minutes. Meanwhile, you can multitask such as sweeping the floor or cooking. Then, take out the clean clothes and hang them up in the air. ▶ On top of that, a washer is excellent at getting rid of stains or any kind of marks. In contrast, no matter hard we try to scrub the stains with a stiff brush, soap, and water, they won’t go. You know, last month my T-shirt got stained when my cousin spilled coffee on it. I soaked it in soapy water for hours, but the stain didn’t disappear. But then I threw it in the washer, and much to my surprise, after many spins, it was gone.
I’d like to
tell
you about the
washer
that is
very
important
to my family.

It’s an
Electrolux
from Germany, a country
well
-known for making top-notch electronic equipment. We intended to
buy
a Samsung,
but
then we
changed
our mind and decided on the
Electrolux
.

We
use
the
washer
every day,
sometimes
twice or three times a day when there’s a bunch of dirty clothes. It has a large capacity and is
very
powerful. If my memory serves, it can hold up to 10 kilos. And what I
particularly
like about this
washer
is the wide range of clothing it can wash and that it
makes
almost no noise when it’s working.

My father
bought
this
washer
two years ago when the previous one broke down. It was
just
wear and tear.

▶ I
think
doing the laundry with a
washer
would be much less labor-intensive and time-saving. Thanks to it, there’s no need to bend our backs to do the washing by hand. What you need to do is
just
put the clothes in the
washer
, hit the correct buttons, and wait for about 45 minutes. Meanwhile, you can multitask such as sweeping the floor or cooking. Then, take out the clean clothes and hang them up in the air.

On top of that
, a
washer
is excellent at getting rid of stains or any kind of marks.
In contrast
, no matter
hard
we try to scrub the stains with a stiff brush, soap, and water, they won’t go.

You know
, last month my T-shirt
got
stained when my cousin spilled coffee on it. I soaked it in soapy water for hours,
but
the stain didn’t disappear.
But
then I threw it in the
washer
, and much to my surprise, after
many
spins, it
was gone
.
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IELTS speaking describe an important equipment in your home

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298 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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