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I’d like to tell you about the washer that is very important to my family. It’s an Electrolux from Germany, a country well-known for making top-notch electronic equipment. We intended to buy a Samsung, but then we changed our mind and decided on the Electrolux. We use the washer every day, sometimes twice or three times a day when there’s a bunch of dirty clothes. It has a large capacity and is very powerful. If my memory serves, it can hold up to 10 kilos. And what I particularly like about this washer is the wide range of clothing it can wash and that it makes almost no noise when it’s working. My father bought this washer two years ago when the previous one broke down. It was just wear and tear. ▶ I think doing the laundry with a washer would be much less labor-intensive and time-saving. Thanks to it, there’s no need to bend our backs to do the washing by hand. What you need to do is just put the clothes in the washer, hit the correct buttons, and wait for about 45 minutes. Meanwhile, you can multitask such as sweeping the floor or cooking. Then, take out the clean clothes and hang them up in the air. ▶ On top of that, a washer is excellent at getting rid of stains or any kind of marks. In contrast, no matter hard we try to scrub the stains with a stiff brush, soap, and water, they won’t go. You know, last month my T-shirt got stained when my cousin spilled coffee on it. I soaked it in soapy water for hours, but the stain didn’t disappear. But then I threw it in the washer, and much to my surprise, after many spins, it was gone.

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 doing the laundry with a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperfectgenuinenormaltruthfulaccuratehonest
washer
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washer
, hit the correct buttons, and wait for about 45 minutes. Meanwhile, you can multitask such as sweeping the floor or cooking. Then, take out the clean clothes and hang them up in the air.

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washer
 is excellent at getting rid of stains or any kind of marks. In contrast
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washer
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