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studying late is bad for health. Also I need more time.

studying late is bad for health. Also I need more time. 3YNJd
I had an exam last week. Therefore, I had to study. In spite of tiredness (being tired), I started to study. Suddenly, the light went out. Therefore, I decided to go to my friend’s house. Although the streets were crowded, I arrived on time. In spite of going to bed early, I overslept. The streets were too crowded. However, we arrived on time. Despite not having ID card, I was allowed to take the test. I did well in my exam. However, I failed. As a result of failing the test, I should take it again.
I had an exam last week.
Therefore
, I had to study.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
In spite of
tiredness (
being tired
), I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to study.
Suddenly
, the light went out.
Therefore
, I decided to go to my friend’s
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. Although the streets
were crowded
, I arrived on time.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
In spite of
going to bed early, I overslept. The streets were too crowded.
However
, we arrived on time. Despite not having ID card, I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
to take the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
. I did
well
in my exam.
However
, I failed.
As a result
of failing the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
, I should take it again.
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IELTS speaking studying late is bad for health. Also I need more time.

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2 paragraphs
96 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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