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My friends helping me to the basmant

My friends helping me to the basmant ArdK3
it happend on sunday. My friend asked me to help her take things to the basement, of course i agreed. So we took her boxes and went to the basement, there were manu boxes, so we went it many times. Also it was cold and dark there. When we were done, we got home. i helped her because she always helps me when i need her. And i feel good helping someone, because it makes me happy. it happend on sunday. My friend asked me to help her take things to the basement, of course i agreed. So we took her boxes and went to the basement, there were manu boxes, so we went it many times. Also it was cold and dark there. When we were done, we got home. i helped her because she always helps me when i need her. And i feel good helping someone, because it makes me happy
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basement
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we took her
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IELTS speaking My friends helping me to the basmant

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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