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Change the habits of yourselves

Change the habits of yourselves m8Q1N
Good afternoon my teacher. Let me introduce myself, you can call me Yen Vi. I'm 15 years old; I live with my grandmother and mum. I have a bother and a sister. Everyone have a different personality and habits. For me, the great feelings is when doing exercise, reading books, listening to music, getting up late on weekends. There are typically quite a few young people who will all have the same interests as me, since most of the students are very tired and stressed after the lessons. Among those hobbies, I feel do exercise is a very good habit. Everday, we should spend time some time practing, it helps us to have good health, it also help us stay awake and have an energetic start to the day. Besides, I have a bad habit of waking up late on weekends. It proved that I'm a lazy person and the weekend is just an excuse. When stayed up late, body was feeling sluggish and uncomfortable. In order to improve them, I set a goal for myself. For example, learning English, get high marks in exams, and expecially is following my dreams. So it's never too late to change, I always told myself that hard working, never give up. Thank you so much for talking the time to listen to the introduction as well as the topic of habits.
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me introduce myself, you can call me Yen Vi.

I'm 15 years
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; I
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with my grandmother and mum. I have a bother and a sister. Everyone
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a
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personality and
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habits
. For me, the great feelings is when doing exercise, reading books, listening to music, getting up
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late
on weekends. There are
typically
quite a few young
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people
who will all have the same interests as me, since most of the students are
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tired and
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stressed
after the lessons. Among those hobbies, I feel do exercise is a
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time
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habit
of waking up
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on weekends. It proved that I'm a lazy person and the weekend is
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an excuse. When stayed up
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late
, body was feeling sluggish and uncomfortable. In order to
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improve
them, I set a goal for myself.
For example
, learning English,
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get
high marks in exams, and
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expecially
is following my dreams.
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it's never too
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hard working
, never give up. Thank you
so
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well
as the topic of
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habits
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IELTS speaking Change the habits of yourselves

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2 paragraphs
228 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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