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Explaining the colours you will use in a business and why.

Explaining the colours you will use in a business and why. OwkL3
I was thinking what job to writr about, suddenly when i looked at my gallery items. Let me tell you i have my own business, i have haberdashery and gallery of my art handmade. Apart from my handmades, i have goods for sale. Examples: Flaw yarn, types of yarns, macrame accessories, little woods, etc. . . . Now what use of colours do i have in my own gallery? The yarns that i have, there are many varients of colours, happy colours. I recently changed decoration of gallery and this change cuased that the colours are more visible. I did it on purpose, because i understood that i will have better sales like this and my customers enjoy more of this much colours and coloured space. They enter to gallery with more joy and they love the space of my shop. In short, i think the colours have so influnence on intreset of customers and their vision. This condition has good sense for customers and seller also.
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IELTS speaking Explaining the colours you will use in a business and why.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
167 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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