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“Never spend your money before you have earned it.”

“Never spend your money before you have earned it. ” 1bgmL
“Never spend your money before you have earned it. ” -Thomas Jefferson. I totally agree with this statement. I’m going to give you some of the main reasons as follows. Firstly, when you squander money before earning, you have yet understood the value of money and the habit of misspending. This will have many consequences such as people cannot lead a happy life and negative feelings will blanket them. In a little more detail, when you have credit card debt. The advantage is having some money to spend first and then repay later. However, swiping a credit card without considering your earning potential will land you in debt and mess up your life. In addition to credit cards debt, kids squander their parents’ money. They freely spend money on their frivolous pastimes without thinking about how hard their parents have to work to earn it. If parents don't teach their offspring, they will be spoiled. Finally, you need to emphasize the importance of spending wisely and shopping for essentials. Besides, you must have a spending plan and be realistic about our plan. In addition to having a plan, you need to encourage reasonable and legal earning such as trying to work hard. This helps you have understood the value of money. That brings me to the end of my presentation. I’ve talked about “Never spend your money before you have earned it. ” - Thomas Jefferson. In my point of view, I totally agree with this decision.
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more detail, when you have credit card debt. The advantage is having
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first
and then repay later.
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, swiping a credit card without considering your earning potential will land you in debt and mess up your life.
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to credit cards debt, kids squander their parents’
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on their frivolous pastimes without thinking about how
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their parents
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work to earn it. If parents don't teach their offspring, they will
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Finally
, you need to emphasize the importance of spending
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have a spending plan and be realistic about our plan.
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you have understood the value of money.

That brings me to the
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IELTS speaking “Never spend your money before you have earned it. ”

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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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