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In the most part of the world cities are becoming larger because people are moving there from the countryside. Describe the advantage and disadvantage of living in cities.

In the most part of the world cities are becoming larger because people are moving there from the countryside. Describe the advantage and disadvantage of living in cities. DYRVp
The population of all nation’s cities have been getting increasing due to the rural region’s inhabitants are migrate to capital cities. This essay will discuss reach the technology and abundance of jobs as the benefits of this venture also consider the pollution and noises and more costs as drawbacks. Firstly, cities always are technology centers in all countries and living in these states is really easy because everything are user-friendly. So one the important benefits of living in cities is the technology, take an internet as an example, what will happend in cities when the internet is out of the service? Approximately throughout the city is unable to do their jobs, hence technology could play main role in this migrate for making the life easier and before in different subjects. Furthermore, Cities could be resources of different jobs. in the big states you are more likely to get occupation rather than rural zones, thus another advantage of living in cities is more job offers and better opportunity for earning money. To illustrate that, in the big cities due to the vast business domain you are able to find many job from manual works to table jobs like working in organization as an accountant. However, cities are included different types of pollution such air pollution or noises that made of vehicles, every year many cars are imported by migrates in the urban regions and they have plenty of noises and pollution that produced by these vehicles in addition of own cities impurity. Moreover, living in urban is expensive. Due to many requests for goods and also ancillary costs such as haulage make the products expensive than countryside for instance, when milk squeezed in villages it has not ancillary costs like transportation. but for the cities it has worker salaries and also haulage so the milk could be more expensive in the states rather the countryside.
The population of all nation’s
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cities
have been getting increasing due to the rural region’s inhabitants are
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migrate
to capital
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cities
. This essay will discuss reach the
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technology
and abundance of
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jobs
as the benefits of this venture
also
consider the
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pollution
and noises and more costs as drawbacks.

Firstly
,
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cities
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always are
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technology
centers in all countries and
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living
in these states is
really
easy
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because
everything are user-friendly.
So
one the
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important
benefits of
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living
in
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cities
is the
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technology
, take an internet as an example, what will
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happend
in
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cities
when the internet is out of the service? Approximately throughout the city is unable to do their
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jobs
,
hence
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technology
could play main role in this migrate for making the life easier and
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before
in
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different
subjects.

Furthermore
,
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Cities
could be resources of
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different
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jobs
.
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in
the
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big
states you are more likely to
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get
occupation
rather
than rural zones,
thus
another advantage of
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living
in
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cities
is more
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job
offers and better opportunity for earning money. To illustrate that, in the
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big
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cities
due to the vast business domain you are able to find
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many
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job
from manual works to table
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jobs
like working in organization as an accountant.

However
,
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cities
are included
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different
types of
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pollution
such air
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pollution
or noises that made of vehicles, every year
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many
cars
are imported
by migrates in the urban
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regions and
they have
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plenty
of noises and
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pollution
that produced by these vehicles
in addition
of
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own
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cities
impurity.

Moreover
,
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living
in urban is expensive. Due to
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many
requests for
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goods
and
also
ancillary costs such as haulage
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make
the products
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expensive
than countryside
for instance
, when milk squeezed in villages it has not ancillary costs like transportation.
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but
for the
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cities
it has worker salaries and
also
haulage
so
the milk could be more expensive in the states
rather
the countryside.
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IELTS speaking In the most part of the world cities are becoming larger because people are moving there from the countryside. Describe the advantage and disadvantage of living in cities.

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