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In order to achieve my goal of graduating from the university of linguistics, I need to First: have your own learning strategy in the most effective way. Second: As a language student, I need to hone many new skills: for example speaking, reading, writing and listening skills. Finally: constantly improve vocabulary by interacting with foreigners online or outside while also helping to develop the remaining skills.

In order to achieve my goal of graduating from the university of linguistics, I need to First: have your own learning strategy in the most effective way. Second: As a language student, I need to hone many new skills: for example speaking, reading, writing and listening skills. Finally: constantly improve vocabulary by interacting with foreigners online or outside while also helping to develop the remaining skills. R0068
In order to achieve my goal of graduating from the university of linguistics, I need to First: have your own learning strategy in the most effective way. Second: As a language student, I need to hone many new skills: for example speaking, reading, writing and listening skills. Finally: constantly improve vocabulary by interacting with foreigners online or outside while also helping to develop the remaining skills.
In order to achieve my goal of graduating from the university of linguistics, I need to

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learning strategy in the most effective way.

Second: As a language student, I need to hone
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new
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speaking, reading, writing and listening
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vocabulary by interacting with foreigners online or outside while
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skills
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IELTS speaking In order to achieve my goal of graduating from the university of linguistics, I need to First: have your own learning strategy in the most effective way. Second: As a language student, I need to hone many new skills: for example speaking, reading, writing and listening skills. Finally: constantly improve vocabulary by interacting with foreigners online or outside while also helping to develop the remaining skills.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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