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I often eat out at fast food chains for breakfast.

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12. Fast food chains. Ex: I often eat out at fast food chains for breakfast. 13. Junk food. Ex: My sister scoided me, because I bought too much junk food. 14. A lack of calories to meet his/her energy need. Ex: If she skip meals too much, she might suffer from a lack of calories to meet her energy needs. 15. Home – made food. Ex: I like my sister’s home – made food, it’s delicious and safe. 16. To have a snack. Ex: I have some candy and ice cream in the frifge to have a snack. 17. To eat balanced diet. Ex: Eating a balanced diet is an important part of maintaining good health, and can help you feel your best. 18. A vegetarian diet. Ex: In today’s world, some people tend to follow a vegetarian. 19. A vegan diet. Ex: A vegan diet contains only plants and foods made from plants. 20. To go on a diet. Ex: My sister decided to go on a diet to lose weight.
12.
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Fast
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food
chains.

Ex: I
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often
eat out at
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fast
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food
chains for breakfast.

13. Junk food.

Ex: My sister
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scoided
me,
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because
I
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bought
too much junk
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food. 14
. A lack of calories to
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meet
his/her energy need.

Ex: If she
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "skips", "skipped".
skip
meals too much, she might suffer from a lack of calories to
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meet
her energy needs.

15. Home
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–
made food.

Ex: I like my sister’s home
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–
made
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food
, it’s delicious and safe.

16. To have a snack.

Ex: I have
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some
candy and ice cream in the
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frifge
to have a snack.

17. To eat balanced diet.

Ex: Eating a balanced diet is an
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important
part of maintaining
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good
health, and can
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help
you feel your best.

18. A vegetarian diet.

Ex: In
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today
’s world,
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some
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people
tend to follow a vegetarian.

19. A vegan diet.

Ex: A vegan diet contains
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only
plants and
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foods
made from plants.

20. To go on a diet.

Ex: My sister decided to go on a diet to lose weight.
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IELTS speaking I often eat out at fast food chains for breakfast.

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  American English
18 paragraphs
172 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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