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what do you do in the weekend?

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My line of work is internal audit manager. I have been working for my job for over 12 years. As you know, this job requires that people are intricate. I am always on the go. In January every year, I must make an audit plan and submit it to BOD. After that, my team and I must follow it. We have to audit all our departments which are signed. We have to find the mistake and take charge of the whole department. When there is an issue, I have to get to the bottom of problems related all the time. It’s an exciting job.
My line of work is internal audit manager. I have been working for my job for over 12 years. As
you know
, this job requires that
people
are intricate. I am always on the go. In January every year, I
must
make
an audit plan and submit it to BOD. After that, my team and I
must
follow it. We
have to
audit all our departments which
are signed
. We
have to
find the mistake and take charge of the whole department. When there is an issue, I
have to
get
to the bottom of problems related all the time. It’s an exciting job.
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