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some students feel udergo the lack of money during the study time, they figured out a solution to improve such solutions by getting a part time job.

some students feel udergo the lack of money during the study time, they figured out a solution to improve such solutions by getting a part time job. 55nbp
some students feel udergo the lack of money during the study time, they figured out a solution to improve such solutions by getting a part time job. some students feel udergo the lack of money during the study time, they figured out a solution to improve such solutions by getting a part time job. some students feel udergo the lack of money during the study time, they figured out a solution to improve such solutions by getting a part time job.
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some
students feel
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udergo
the lack of money during the study
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time
, they figured out a
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solution
to
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improve
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by getting a part
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some
students feel
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udergo
the lack of money during the study
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time
, they figured out a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solution
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
such
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solutions
by getting a part
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
job.
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IELTS speaking some students feel udergo the lack of money during the study time, they figured out a solution to improve such solutions by getting a part time job.

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