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introduce about yourself. What are your favourite subject?

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Greetings instructor! My name is Nguyễn Hồng Bảo Ngọc. I will be fifteen years old on December 16th. I live in Tân Phú quarter with my family. Lately, I have studied at Phú Mỹ secondary school. I decide that I want to learn at the Ho Chi Minh City University of Economics in the future. I think I need to try to improve on my weaknesses to be able to get into the desired university. Currently, I have registered for the English exam but my English is quite good so I need to try to improve my English skills. And my favorite subjects are English, biology, math.
Greetings instructor! My name is
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Nguyễn
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Hồng
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Bảo
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. I will be fifteen years
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on December 16th. I
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live
in
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Tân
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quarter with my family. Lately, I have studied at
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secondary school. I decide that I want to learn at the Ho Chi Minh City University of Economics in the future. I
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think
I need to try to
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improve
on my weaknesses to be able to
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get
into the desired university.
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but
my English is quite
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my English
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skills
. And my favorite subjects are English, biology, math.
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IELTS speaking introduce about yourself. What are your favourite subject?

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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