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I have followed a recipe for chicken soup,but it’s not as good as my mom’s cooking.

I have followed a recipe for chicken soup, but it’s not as good as my mom’s cooking. pXG03
21. To follow a recipe. Ex: I have followed a recipe for chicken soup, but it’s not as good as my mom’s cooking. 22. Chinese cuisine. Ex: Chiniese cuisine is rich and diverse. 23. A diet rich in. Ex: Eating a diet rich in protein can help people lose weight. 24. A diet low in. Ex: If you were diabetic, you should avoid eat drying fruits. 25. A low – calories diet. Ex: My grandma’s low –calories diet didn’t change within 7 days. 26. To count calories. Ex: Calories counting can help you combat overeating by giving you a better understanding of how much you are really consuming. 27. To provide somebody with a healthier diet. Ex: Eating fresh food and safe food provide people with a healthier diet. 28. To put on weight. Ex: If you wanted to put on weight, you should eat a high protein diet. 29. A slimming clup. Ex: the simming clup support members to achieve their weight-loss goals. 30. Low in fat and high in fiber. Ex: One way to improve overall health by adopting a low in fat and high in fiber diet.
21. To follow a recipe.

Ex: I have followed a recipe for chicken soup,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it’s not as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
as my mom’s cooking.

22. Chinese cuisine.

Ex:
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Chiniese
cuisine is rich and diverse.

23. A diet rich in.

Ex: Eating a diet rich in protein can
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help
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
lose weight.

24. A diet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
low
in.

Ex: If you were diabetic, you should avoid eat drying fruits.

25. A
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low
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
calories diet.

Ex: My grandma’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
low
–calories diet didn’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
within 7 days.

26. To count calories.

Ex: Calories counting can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you combat overeating by giving you a better understanding of how much you are
really
consuming.

27. To provide somebody with a healthier diet.

Ex: Eating fresh food and safe food provide
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
with a healthier diet.

28. To put on weight.

Ex: If you wanted to put on weight, you should eat a high protein diet.

29. A slimming
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clup
.

Ex: the
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simming
Possible spelling mistake found.
clup
support members to achieve their weight-loss goals.

30.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Low
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fat
and high in fiber.

Ex: One way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
overall
health by adopting a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
low
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fat
and high in fiber diet.
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IELTS speaking I have followed a recipe for chicken soup, but it’s not as good as my mom’s cooking.

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20 paragraphs
190 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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