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describe a friend of your family

describe a friend of your family 550wP

I'm going to talk about one of my father's friends who was like a family friend to us and I was the dearest one for him in my childhood. He used to visit our house frequently. if I'm not mistaken it goes back to more than 20 years ago when I first saw him. we called him dr Hindi because he was a dr from India. to describe him in terms of appearance he was relatively tall with a slim figure. he was dark-complexioned that's why he was different from the rest of the people I had seen before. characterwise he was the kind of person we could count on whenever we came up against a problem. He was a true friend of my father in all senses of the world. they had a lot in common that's why they spent a lot of time with each other. I didn't like him at first I was actually afraid of him however he Grown on me over the days. His kindness was beyond question he usually surprised me for instance he gave me a doll which I still have. although he was older than me, we got along incredibly well. Dr Hindi was someone who I really looked up to because Not only was he a competent doctor but he was also skilful in painting He taught me how to paint professionally. unfortunately, he returned to his country and we lost contact

I'm going to talk about one of my father's friends who was like a family friend to Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).us, and
us and
 I was the dearest one for him in my childhood. He This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to visit our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
frequently
.

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if
 I'm not mistaken it goes back to more than 20 years ago when I first
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saw
 him. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 called him Possible spelling mistake found.DrDRordoMrdry
dr
 Hindi This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he was a Possible spelling mistake found.DrDRordoMrdry
dr
 from India.

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to
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describe
 him in terms of appearance he was relatively
 tall with a slim figure. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHe
he
 was dark-complexioned that's why he was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 from the rest of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 I had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
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before
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCharacterwise
characterwise
 he was the kind of person we could count on whenever we came up against a problem. He was a true friend of my father in all senses of the world. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThey
they
 had a lot in common that's why they spent This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 time with each other. I didn't like him at first
 I was actually
 afraid of him however
It seems that a verb is missing after "he". Please verify.he ishe was
he
 Grown on me over the days. His kindness was beyond question he usually
 surprised me for instance
 he gave me a doll which I still
 have.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAlthough
although
 he was older than me, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 along incredibly
well
. Dr Hindi was someone who I really
 looked up to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 was he a competent doctor This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he was also
Possible spelling mistake. 'skilful' is British English.skillful
skilful
 in painting

He taught me how to paint professionally
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterUnfortunately
unfortunately
, he returned to his country and we lost contact