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cause of the generation gap

cause of the generation gap e3y5O
1. age difference -Parents way of thinking and what they deem to be normal tends to be different -The age difference also make parents and children think differently -Many parents still like the old days and their children follow the modern ones Ex: parents love music Bolero >< children love music usuk-kpop… 2. not enough interaction with children -Having little time to interact with children will make it impossible for parents to fully understand what their children are thinking, therefore the gap between the two generations is too far to be resolved with a few conversations. 3. life change -Technology is developing more and more and it is a big cause of the gap between generations -They imposed their children on studying to having fun. That makes children engaged, uncomfortable. -Limitation and not allowing children to pursue their dreams. Children gradually feel sorry for yourself and they don’t express to your parents -Between parents and children is no longer linked together as before. Parents often complain about their children’s life style, dress, talkative. 4. too many comparisons -Comparing children to each other or even to how you were as a child is another reason the gap becomes wide. This often causes them to lose confidence in themselves and can destroy any enthusiasm they may have previously had. 5. the way of thinking -While children always want to appear to be adults and want to be independent in all decisions, parents think that their children are not old enough, understanding enough and need to listen to them. It is this contradiction that makes the distance between the two sides further and further away.
1. age
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still
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days and their
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follow the modern ones

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music Bolero ><
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interaction with children

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time to interact with
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it impossible for
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parents
to
fully
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are thinking,
therefore
the gap between the two generations is too far to
be resolved
with a few conversations.

3. life
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cause of the gap between generations

-They imposed their
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children
on studying to having fun. That
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makes
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children
engaged, uncomfortable.

-Limitation and not allowing
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children
to pursue their dreams.
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gradually
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yourself and
they don’t express to your parents

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is no longer linked together as
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complain about their
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life style, dress, talkative.

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comparisons

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to each other or even to how you were as a child is another reason the gap becomes wide. This
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often
causes them to lose confidence in themselves and can
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destroy
any enthusiasm they may have previously had.

5. the way of thinking

-While
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children
always want to appear to be adults and want to be independent in all decisions,
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parents
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that their
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are not
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, understanding
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and need to listen to them. It is this contradiction that
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makes
the distance between the two sides
further
and
further
away.
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