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How long do you take to get ready in the morning

How long do you take to get ready in the morning 3MDpN
I have an issue with stomach aches in the morning. When I wake up, I prefer to lie in bed for about half an hour before actually getting up in order to prevent the stomach ache. Fast-forward past that. I go to the bathroom with my clothes and do my regular bathroom routine. I get out, brush my hair, get my bag, get my shoes on, and leave. I like to give myself an hour and 15 minutes. I never eat breakfast at home because of my stomach problem. I noticed that if I eat before leaving, I get a lot of pain for most of the day. I learned to either buy bread from the bakery on my way to school, or to just not eat. Another issue I face is that I live over an hour away from my school, which means I have to get up as early as 5: 30 am sometimes. Obviously, it’s gonna take more to get
I have an issue with stomach aches in the morning. When I wake up, I prefer to lie in bed for about half an hour
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before
actually
getting up in order to
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prevent
the stomach ache.
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Fast
-forward past that. I go to the bathroom with my clothes and do my regular bathroom routine. I
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get
out, brush my hair,
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get
my bag,
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get
my shoes on, and
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leave
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
like to give myself an hour and 15 minutes.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
never eat breakfast at home
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because
of my stomach problem.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
noticed that if I eat
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before
leaving, I
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get
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a lot of
pain for most of the day.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
learned to either
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buy
bread from the bakery on my way to school, or to
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just
not eat.

Another issue I face is that I
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live
over an hour away from my school, which means I
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have to
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get
up as early as 5: 30 am
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sometimes
.
Obviously
, it’s
The word 'gonna' is informal. Consider an alternative.
gonna
take more to
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get
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IELTS speaking How long do you take to get ready in the morning

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