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Fruit and vegetable are important for the immune symstem .

Fruit and vegetable are important for the immune symstem. 6lbMG
1. The immune symstem Ex: Fruit and vegetable are important for the immune symstem. 2. A chemical preservative Ex: The vegetables contain chemical preservative 3. Artificial colouring and flavouring Ex: They used artificial colouring and flavouring to make a cake 4. Food labelling Ex: I often lead food labelling in order to choose the food 5. Food processing Ex: The food processing industry plays as important role in the sosial life. 6. Shelf life Ex: you shouldn’t eat this cake, because its shelf life has expired. 7. A food retailer Ex: I often buy at a food retailer near my house 8. Organic food Ex: Organic foods have gained popularity because people have become aware of their benefits 9. Genetically modified (GM) food Ex: All geneticall modified food should be assessed before being allowed on the market. 10. Free-range eggs / free-range meatl /free-range product Ex: you should be buying free-range eggs, because free-range eggs pack a nutritional punch unlike any other food
1. The immune
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symstem


Ex: Fruit and vegetable are
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important
for the immune
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symstem
.

2. A chemical
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preservative


Ex: The vegetables contain chemical preservative

3. Artificial
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colouring
and
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flavouring


Ex: They
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used
artificial
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colouring
and
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flavouring
to
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make
a cake

4.
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Food
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labelling


Ex: I
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often
lead
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food
labelling in order to choose the
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food 5
.
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Food
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processing


Ex: The
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food
processing industry plays as
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important
role in the
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sosial
life.

6. Shelf
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life


Ex: you shouldn’t eat this cake,
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because
its shelf life has expired.

7. A
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food
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retailer


Ex: I
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often
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buy
at a
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food
retailer near my
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house


8. Organic
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food


Ex: Organic
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foods
have gained popularity
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because
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people
have become aware of their benefits

9.
Genetically
modified (GM)
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food


Ex: All
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geneticall
modified
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food
should
be assessed
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before
being
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allowed
on the market.

10. Free-range eggs / free-range
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meatl
/free-range
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product


Ex: you should be buying free-range eggs,
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because
free-range eggs pack a nutritional punch unlike any other
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food
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IELTS speaking Fruit and vegetable are important for the immune symstem.

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  American English
18 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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