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How do you spend time with your friends?

How do you spend time with your friends? NyrJq
How do you spend time with your friend? Friends are people who have the same eyesight with you and  a deep connection. You often hang out with them. Firstly, my friends and i like to go park, ride a bicycle and have a picnic. It is relaxing. Secondly, we go to attractions. I like various activities and challeges. In addition, we go to restaurant or cafe. There we taste new food and talk. It is really fun. To sum up, spend time with friends is very fun and brings a lot of joy. What do you make happy?
How do you spend time with your friend?

Friends are
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people
who have the same eyesight with you and
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a deep connection. You
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often
hang out with them.

Firstly
, my friends and
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i
like to go park, ride a bicycle and have a picnic. It is relaxing.

Secondly
, we go to attractions. I like various activities and
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challeges
.

In addition
, we go to restaurant or
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cafe
. There we taste new food and talk. It is
really
fun.

To sum up
, spend time with friends is
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very
fun and brings
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a lot of
joy.

What do you
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make
happy?
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IELTS speaking How do you spend time with your friends?

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98 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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