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Strong beliefs prevent people from thinking clearly about issues.

Strong beliefs prevent people from thinking clearly about issues. 2ardM
The phrase “strong beliefs” may bring to mind images of heroes, people who have fought valiantly for what they knew to be right, or it may bring to mind images of tyrants, people whose beliefs were so strong (if misguided) that they were able to commit atrocities without regard for others. Whether such figures fall on the right side of history or not, strong beliefs often brook no adjustment and permit no new information to be considered. However, some beliefs are strong for good reason—who is not possessed of a strong belief that the earth is round, for instance? Strong beliefs do prevent people from thinking clearly about issues when those beliefs are based on emotion, group loyalty, or tradition; however, strong beliefs need not cloud our thinking when those beliefs are a genuine product of a logical, ongoing search for truth that is open to revision and new evidence. Seventeenth-century Italian astronomer Galileo Galilei alleged that the earth moved around the sun, rather than the reverse; for this heliocentric theory he was tried by the Catholic Church, convicted of heresy, and placed under house arrest for the rest of his life. Leaders of the Church held the strong belief that Earth must be at the center of the universe. When presented with evidence that the orbits of the planets seemed to go every which way in this model (yet Galileo's model showed the planets moving, more sensibly, in ellipses), the Church did not admit this new evidence into its thinking. Of course, Galileo himself was possessed of strong beliefs, and although he was forced to publicly recant, he did not actually change his view. Yet Galileo's belief was not dogmatic; it was based on years of astronomical observation and careful calculations. Furthermore, Galileo, a Catholic, began with a geocentric worldview; his very heliocentric position was proof of his willingness to change his mind in the face of new evidence. While Church leaders possessed strong beliefs that brooked no adjustment, Rene Descartes was a devout religious thinker whose strong beliefs did not cloud his thinking. The purpose of Descartes’ famous “I think, therefore I exist” was to create a system of logic that would allow him to clear away that which he only thought he knew (but didn't actually know for sure), so he could logically build a case for his religious belief. Adopting a position of ultimate skepticism, Descartes asserted that all he really knew was that he existed. He then reasoned, logically, from that point. Whether one agrees with Descartes’ conclusions, his “Meditations” is a masterwork of clear and rigorous thinking. Just as Descartes was willing to toss aside all he thought he knew in pursuit of verifiable truth, thinkers on moral issues, such as slavery, have demonstrated that strong beliefs cloud our thinking if we don't admit of new evidence, but can be a force for good if we do. In the United States prior to the Civil War, pro- slavery forces argued that the great society of ancient Athens had been built on a framework of slavery. When presented with new information, such as that Greek slavery was very different from the slavery practiced in the U. S. , or Sojourner Truth's poignant “Ain't I a Woman? ” address, reprinted across the nation—most did not change their minds. Of course, some did, and the North had no shortage of outspoken abolitionists. The Civil War was a war of strong belief against strong belief; the side most willing to change its mind in the face of moral argument was, rightfully, the side that won. All people are created equal, but all strong beliefs are not. Strong beliefs based on evidence and logic are strong beliefs that are nevertheless changeable, and need not muddy our thinking. It is dogmatism that is the enemy, not strength of conviction.
The phrase
“strong
beliefs”
may bring to
mind
images of heroes,
people


who have fought
valiantly
for what they
knew
to be
right
, or it may bring to

mind images of tyrants,
people
whose
beliefs
were
so
strong
(if misguided) that

they were able to commit atrocities without regard for others. Whether such

figures fall on the
right
side of history or not,
strong
beliefs
often
brook no

adjustment and permit no
new
information to
be considered
.
However
,
some


beliefs are
strong
for
good
reason—who is not possessed of a
strong
belief
that

the earth is round,
for instance
?
Strong
beliefs
do
prevent
people
from thinking

clearly
about issues when those
beliefs
are based
on emotion, group loyalty, or

tradition;
however
,
strong
beliefs
need not cloud our
thinking
when those beliefs

are a genuine product of a logical, ongoing search for truth
that is
open to

revision and
new
evidence.

Seventeenth-century Italian astronomer Galileo
Galilei
alleged that the

earth
moved
around the sun,
rather
than the reverse; for this heliocentric theory

he
was tried
by the Catholic Church, convicted of heresy, and placed under

house
arrest for the rest of his life. Leaders of the Church held the
strong
belief

that Earth
must
be at the center of the universe. When presented with evidence

that the orbits of the planets seemed to go every which way in this model (
yet


Galileo's model
showed
the planets moving, more
sensibly
, in ellipses), the

Church did not admit this
new
evidence into its
thinking
.
Of course
, Galileo

himself
was possessed
of
strong
beliefs
, and although he
was forced
to
publicly


recant, he did not
actually
change
his view.
Yet
Galileo's
belief
was not

dogmatic; it
was based
on years of astronomical observation and careful

calculations.
Furthermore
, Galileo, a Catholic, began with a geocentric

worldview; his
very
heliocentric position was proof of his willingness to
change


his
mind
in the face of
new
evidence.

While Church leaders possessed
strong
beliefs
that brooked no adjustment,

Rene Descartes was a devout religious thinker whose
strong
beliefs
did not

cloud his
thinking
. The purpose of Descartes’
famous
“I
think
,
therefore
I exist”

was to create a system of logic that would
allow
him to
clear
away that which he

only
thought
he
knew
(
but
didn't
actually
know for sure),
so
he could
logically


build a case for his religious
belief
. Adopting a position of ultimate skepticism,

Descartes asserted that all he
really
knew
was that he existed. He then reasoned,

logically
, from that point. Whether one
agrees
with Descartes’ conclusions, his

“Meditations” is a masterwork of
clear
and rigorous thinking.

Just
as Descartes was willing to toss aside all he
thought
he
knew
in pursuit

of verifiable truth, thinkers on moral issues, such as
slavery
, have demonstrated

that
strong
beliefs
cloud our
thinking
if we don't admit of
new
evidence,
but
can

be a force for
good
if we do. In the United States prior to the Civil War, pro-

slavery forces argued that the great society of ancient Athens had
been built
on a

framework of
slavery
. When presented with
new
information, such as that

Greek
slavery
was
very
different
from the
slavery
practiced in the U. S.
,
or

Sojourner Truth's poignant “Ain't I a Woman? ” address, reprinted across the

nation—most did not
change
their
minds
.
Of course
,
some
did, and the North

had no shortage of outspoken abolitionists. The Civil War was a war of strong

belief against
strong
belief
; the side most willing to
change
its
mind
in the face

of moral argument was,
rightfully
, the side that won.

All
people
are created
equal,
but
all
strong
beliefs
are not.
Strong
beliefs

based on evidence and logic are
strong
beliefs
that are
nevertheless
changeable,

and need not muddy our
thinking
. It is dogmatism
that is
the enemy, not

strength of conviction.
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