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Describe the holiday in your country

Describe the holiday in your country 9lQdn
Every year, Tet holiday is the most important and popular festival in Vietnam. It takes place on the first day of the year. On Tet holidays, people often spend time with family. On the 1st and 2nd, everyone will visit their family members and wish them a lot of luck Children often receive lucky money during Tet. It's a way to wish the New Year and wish for good luck. When they receive lucky money, they will send wishes to the adults On Tet holiday, the asmotphere is bustling and fresh. Chung cake and Day cake are specific food of those day. I looking forward to I wish i became to child to receive luckey money and
Every year, Tet holiday is the most
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important
and popular festival in Vietnam. It takes place on the
first
day of the year.

On Tet holidays,
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people
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often
spend time with family. On the 1st and 2nd, everyone will visit their family members and
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wish
them
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a lot of
luck

Children
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often
receive lucky money during Tet. It's a way to
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wish
the New Year and
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wish
for
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good
luck. When they receive lucky money, they will
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send
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wishes
to the adults

On Tet holiday, the
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asmotphere
is bustling and fresh.
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Chung cake
and Day cake are specific food of
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those day
.

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I looking
forward to I
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wish
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i
became to child to receive
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luckey
money and
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IELTS speaking Describe the holiday in your country

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