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write giving direction to other place QKj79
A: Excuse me, I am trying to find the way to the Bat Dan street. Could you tell me how to get there, please? B: Bát Đàn street, right? A: Yes, Bát Đàn street. B: You seem to be visitor? A: Yes, I want to go there to visit some places B: Oh. Maybe I can. There are a lot of ways but I will give you the fastest one due to the fact that you are using bicycle A: Great! I think I should jot down your instruction lest I will forget B: Ok. Now, turn right and go straight ahead. Then, you will face a fork. A: Which directions I should choose? B: Turn left into Ly Quoc Su street. A: Ly Quoc Su street? I heard from my friends that there is a famous “Pho” restaurant in here, right? B: Yes, it is “ Pho 10 Ly Quoc Su”. Actually, I love it and I highly recommend that you should try it if you have chance. You know, it is so interesting that this restaurant is owned by dad of my idol. Wow, fantastic A: Oh really? I certainly will try when I pass it B: Okie. Next, carry on straight up to the end of the street. You will stand at crossroads. Now, turn right and ride in about 5 minutes to other crossroads. Turn left into Hang Hom street. Can you still write down my instruction? A: Yes, I can B: Nice. After that, go straight to the T conjunction and turn left. That brings you to Hang Non street. Then, cycle in some minutes and take the first right into Hang Thiec street. Go to the end of this street and turn left. It is Bat Dan street which is opposite to Hang Bo street. A: Ok. Thanks a lot. Good bye
A: Excuse me, I am trying to find the way to the Bat Dan
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street
. Could you
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tell
me how to
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get
there,
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please
?

B:
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Bát
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Đàn
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street
,
right
?

A: Yes,
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Bát
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Đàn
street.

B: You seem to be visitor?

A: Yes, I want to go there to visit
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some
places

B: Oh. Maybe I can. There are
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a lot of
ways
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but
I will give you the fastest one due to the fact that you are using bicycle

A: Great! I
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think
I should jot down your instruction lest I will forget

B: Ok.
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Now
,
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turn
right
and go straight ahead. Then, you will face a fork.

A: Which directions I should choose?

B:
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Turn
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left
into
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Ly
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Quoc
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Su
street.

A:
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Ly
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Quoc
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Su
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street
? I heard from my friends that there is a
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famous
“
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Pho
” restaurant in here,
right
?

B: Yes, it is
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“
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Pho
10
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Ly
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Quoc
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Su
”.
Actually
, I
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love
it and I
highly
recommend that you should try it if you have chance.
You know
, it is
so
interesting that this restaurant is
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owned
by dad of my idol. Wow, fantastic

A: Oh
really
? I
certainly
will try when I pass it

B:
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Okie
.
Next
, carry on straight up to the
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end
of the
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street
. You will stand at crossroads.
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Now
,
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turn
right
and ride in about 5 minutes to other crossroads.
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Turn
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left
into
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Hang
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Hom
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street
. Can you
still
write down my instruction?

A: Yes, I can

B: Nice. After that, go straight to the T conjunction and
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turn
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left
. That brings you to
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Hang
Non
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street
. Then, cycle in
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some
minutes and take the
first
right
into
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Hang
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Thiec
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street
. Go to the
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end
of this
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street
and
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turn
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left
. It is Bat Dan
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street
which is opposite to
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Hang
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Bo
street.

A: Ok. Thanks a lot.
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Good bye
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IELTS speaking write giving direction to other place

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12 paragraphs
307 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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