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NOW A DAYS POLLUTION IS A BIG PROBLAM

NOW A DAYS POLLUTION IS A BIG PROBLAM 2xA5X
Pollution has become a very common yet serious issue in today’s world. It has been there for a long time even before human evolution such as volcanic eruption, wildfire which lead to various photochemical reactions in the atmosphere. The current concern is that it is rising day by day due to various resources of pollutants. And, one of the pollutants is human and human-created machines. It is to say that pollution is damaging the mother earth severely and we, humans, should play our part to prevent it from happening. What is Pollution? Pollution sepsis the presence of contaminants in the natural environment that causes harm and damage and it leads to adverse changes. Kinds of Pollution: There are mainly three kinds of pollution - 1) Air Pollution, 2) Water Pollution, and 3) Soil Pollution. Air Pollution: Air Pollution occurs due to the presence of harmful gases and substances in the air. It is due to vehicle emission, dust and dirt, poisonous gasses from the factories etc. To reduce air pollution, we should use carpooling or public transport rather than using your private vehicles, we should avoid burning trash or other materials etc. Water Pollution: Water Pollution happens when toxic substances get mixed in various water bodies such as lakes, oceans, rivers etc. Here toxic substances mean Chemical fertilizer, Industrial waste, Sewage and wastewater, Mining activities, Marine dumping etc. Soil Pollution: Soil pollution depicts the contamination of soil due to the presence of toxic his birthday on 5th september, celebrating as Teachers's Day.
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has become a
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very
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serious issue in
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today
’s world. It has been there for a long time even
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before
human evolution such as volcanic eruption, wildfire which lead to various photochemical reactions in the atmosphere. The
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current
concern is that it is rising day by day
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due
to various resources of pollutants. And, one of the pollutants is human and human-created machines. It is to say that
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pollution
is damaging the mother earth
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severely and
we, humans, should play our part to
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prevent
it from happening.

What is Pollution?

Pollution sepsis the presence of contaminants in the natural environment that causes harm and damage and it leads to adverse
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changes
.

Kinds of Pollution:

There are
mainly
three kinds of
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pollution
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1) Air
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Pollution
, 2) Water
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Pollution
, and 3) Soil Pollution.

Air Pollution:

Air
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Pollution
occurs
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due
to the presence of harmful gases and substances in the air. It is
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due
to vehicle emission, dust and dirt, poisonous gasses from the factories etc. To
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reduce
air
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pollution
, we should
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use
carpooling or public transport
rather
than using your private vehicles, we should avoid burning trash or other materials etc.

Water Pollution:

Water
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Pollution
happens when toxic substances
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get
mixed in various water bodies such as lakes, oceans, rivers etc. Here toxic substances mean Chemical fertilizer, Industrial waste, Sewage and wastewater, Mining activities, Marine dumping etc.

Soil Pollution:

Soil
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pollution
depicts the contamination of soil
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due
to the presence of toxic his birthday on 5th
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september
, celebrating as Teachers's Day.
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