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Describe your idea of a perfect holiday destination. v.1

Describe your idea of a perfect holiday destination. v. 1
Describe your idea of a perfect holiday destination. You should say: where it would be what type of place it would be how it will look like and explain why you think it would be a perfect holiday destination. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer: I have so many ideas of a perfect holiday destination in my head that it would be practically impossible to choose one and then describe it. However, I would still go ahead and try my best to make sense of my version of a perfect holiday destination. First, my perfect holiday destination would be ideally located on an island, far away from civilization, surrounded by a cool and calm ocean. Of course, when I say that my perfect holiday destination would be far away from civilization, I don’t necessarily mean to suggest that it would very far from the airport. The island would be covered by many different kinds of fruit trees, along with other kinds beautiful forests and landscapes, so that I can always enjoy the taste of some fresh fruits when feeling hungry. The weather should neither be too hot or too cold of my perfect holiday destination. Having some beautiful looking sandy beaches, my perfect holiday destination shouldn’t have any tall buildings or hotels, covering the sky, so that I can actually see the beautiful sky and the moon at night.   I wouldn’t like my perfect holiday destination to be too quiet nor too crowded and busy because that would actually take the whole fun away of mingling and socializing with people from different countries and culture. Having a few hills and mountains by the sides of the sea beaches wouldn’t exactly hurt my version of a perfect holiday destination either. Finally, the hotels in my ideal holiday destination should be close to the sandy beaches so that I can capture a perfect overview of the ocean by sitting in their balconies. Anyway, it would be my perfect holiday destination, mainly because it would help me forget about the worries and negativities of my daily life. Besides, it would also allow me to learn, understand and appreciate people from other countries, cultures and backgrounds in a way which is not possible otherwise. Finally, it would also refresh my mind and body by keeping me close to the beautiful nature.
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Describe
your
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idea
of a
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perfect
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holiday
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destination
. You should say: where it would be what type of place it would be how it will look like and
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explain
why you
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think
it would be a
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perfect
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holiday
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destination
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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Model Answer:

I have
so
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many
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ideas
of a
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perfect
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holiday
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destination
in my head that it would be
practically
impossible to choose one and then
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describe
it.
However
, I would
still
go ahead and try my best to
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make
sense of my version of a
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perfect
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holiday
destination.

First
, my
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perfect
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holiday
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destination
would be
ideally
located on an island, far away from civilization, surrounded by a cool and calm ocean.
Of course
, when I say that my
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perfect
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holiday
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destination
would be far away from civilization, I don’t
necessarily
mean to suggest that it would
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very
far from the airport.

The island would
be covered
by
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many
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different
kinds of fruit trees, along with other kinds
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beautiful
forests and landscapes,
so
that I can always enjoy the taste of
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some
fresh fruits when feeling hungry. The weather should neither be too hot or too
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cold
of my
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perfect
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holiday
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destination
. Having
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some
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beautiful
looking sandy beaches, my
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perfect
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holiday
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destination
shouldn’t have any tall buildings or hotels, covering the sky,
so
that I can
actually
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see
the
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beautiful
sky and the moon at night.
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I wouldn’t like my
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perfect
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holiday
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destination
to be too quiet nor too crowded and busy
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because
that would
actually
take the whole fun away of mingling and socializing with
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people
from
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different
countries and culture. Having a few hills and mountains by the sides of the sea beaches wouldn’t exactly hurt my version of a
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perfect
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holiday
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destination
either.
Finally
, the hotels in my ideal
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holiday
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destination
should be close to the sandy beaches
so
that I can capture a
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perfect
overview of the ocean by sitting in their balconies.

Anyway
, it would be my
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perfect
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holiday
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destination
,
mainly
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because
it would
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help
me forget about the worries and negativities of my daily life.
Besides
, it would
also
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allow
me to learn, understand and appreciate
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people
from other countries, cultures and backgrounds in a way which is not possible
otherwise
.
Finally
, it would
also
refresh my mind and body by keeping me close to the
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beautiful
nature.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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Karl Albrecht

IELTS speaking Describe your idea of a perfect holiday destination. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
423 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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