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Describe your favourite day of the week. v.1

Describe your favourite day of the week. v. 1
Describe your favourite day of the week. You should say: what day it is what you usually do on that day how this day is different to you than other days of the week and explain why this is your favourite day of the week. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer: Deciding on the favourite day of the week is not an easy task, especially, when you are always busy with one thing or another. But, I will still go ahead and try my best to talk about a particular day which I would consider as my favourite. Now, I am not sure many people would agree with me, but I consider “Friday” as my favourite day. For the most part, Friday is like any other weekdays to me because, on this day also, I wake up early in the morning as usual and then take a little morning walk outside before coming back to home and then taking a shower. After the shower, I take a light breakfast as I don’t really like to feel too much full in my stomach and sleepy before starting the workday. By the way, I live a bit too far away from my work, so I have to wake up really early in order to beat the morning rush and traffics on the roads. After arriving at the office, I head straight to my own desk and start preparing the tasks list for the day after talking to my senior manager and other fellow workers, if needed. The work continues for about 5 long hours and stops at around 1: 00 pm for a lunch break.   After finishing lunch, I go back to work again and finish it at around 5: 00 pm. Then, I hop into a bus and go straight to my home. Anyway, while this day may seem like any other day, Friday’s are a bit different for me because I feel more energized with an anticipation of a great weekend ahead. Friday is my favourite day of the week, primarily because I feel more energized and productive on this day by managing to finish my work rather quickly. Besides, this is the day when I get to prepare for a happy weekend without worrying about what might have gone wrong in other days of the week. After all, preparing for a great weekend is actually more fun to me than the actual acts of a weekend.
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Describe
your
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favourite
day of the
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week
. You should say: what day it is what you
usually
do on that day how this day is
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different
to you than
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other
days of the
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week
and
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explain
why this is your
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favourite
day of the
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week
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
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Model Answer:

Deciding on the
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favourite
day of the
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week
is not an easy task,
especially
, when you are always busy with one thing or another.
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But
, I will
still
go ahead and try my best to talk about a particular day which I would consider as my
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favourite
.

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Now
, I am not sure
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many
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people
would
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agree
with me,
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but
I consider “Friday” as my
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favourite
day.
For the most part
, Friday is like any
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other
weekdays to me
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because
, on this day
also
, I wake up early in the morning as usual and then take a
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little
morning walk outside
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before
coming back to home and then taking a shower. After the shower, I take a light breakfast as I don’t
really
like to feel too much full in my stomach and sleepy
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before
starting the workday.

By the way, I
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live
a bit too far away from my
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work
,
so
I
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have to
wake up
really
early in order to beat the morning rush and traffics on the roads. After arriving at the office, I head straight to my
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own
desk and
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start
preparing the tasks list for the day after talking to my senior manager and
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other
fellow workers, if needed. The
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work
continues for about 5 long hours and
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stops
at around 1: 00 pm for a lunch break.
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After finishing lunch, I go back to
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work
again and finish it at around 5: 00 pm. Then, I hop into a bus and go straight to my home.
Anyway
, while this day may seem like any
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other
day, Friday’s are a bit
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different
for me
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because
I feel more energized with an anticipation of a great
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weekend
ahead.

Friday is my
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favourite
day of the
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week
,
primarily
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because
I feel more energized and productive on this day by managing to finish my
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work
rather
quickly
.
Besides
, this is the day when I
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get
to prepare for a happy
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weekend
without worrying about what might have gone
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wrong
in
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other
days of the
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week
.
After all
, preparing for a great
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weekend
is
actually
more fun to me than the actual acts of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weekend
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
The man who does not know other languages, unless he is a man of genius, necessarily has deficiencies in his ideas.
Victor Hugo

IELTS speaking Describe your favourite day of the week. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
443 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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