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Describe a cold winter morning you remember. v.1

Describe a cold winter morning you remember. v. 1
Describe a cold winter morning you remember. You should say: when it was what you were doing what the temperature was like and explain why you remember this particularly cold winter morning. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer: To tell the truth, remembering a cool winter is among the least favourite thing to do for me, simply because I try to run away from winter as far as I can. But, no matter how far I try to run, I do have to suffer from “the bite” of winter pretty much every year, just like I did about a few years ago. As I have already mentioned earlier, I don’t really like winter.   But, I am pretty sure that Mother Nature doesn’t really care whether I like it or not, just as it didn’t care on a morning in mid-December when I needed to pick up my aunt from the airport. As soon as I woke up and took a peek through my window, I immediately knew that it was going to be a cold morning as I could see fog covering the landscape above the ground. For a minute, I thought that I would wait until the sun had come out but then decided against it, as my aunt wouldn’t like the delay. So, I took a taxi and hit the road after wearing all kinds of warm clothes to protect me from the assault of a cold winter morning, as the temperature on that day was probably as low as minus 5 degree Celsius. But, after arriving at the airport, I came to know that there was a flight delay for about two hours because of low visibility in the sky. So, I had no other option but to wait at the airport in open cold, until my auntie arrived, as the airport authority had restricted our access to the arrival lounge because of security reasons. Anyway, I remember this particular winter morning because it was really cold for my liking. Besides, travelling to the airport and waiting there for about 2 hours in cold was a very troubling experience for me also. Finally, I remember it because there was too much fog in the atmosphere on that day, and I was afraid of having an accident because of the low visibility of the road.
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a
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winter
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morning
you
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remember
. You should say: when it was what you were doing what the temperature was like and
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explain
why you
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remember
this
particularly
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cold
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winter
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morning
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
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Model Answer:

To
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tell
the truth, remembering a cool
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winter
is among the least
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favourite
thing to do for me,
simply
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because
I try to run away from
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winter
as far as I can.
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But
, no matter how far I try to run, I do
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have to
suffer from “the bite” of
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winter
pretty much every year,
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just
like I did about a few years ago.

As I have already mentioned earlier, I don’t
really
like
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winter
.
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But
, I am pretty sure that Mother Nature doesn’t
really
care whether I like it or not,
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just
as it didn’t care on a
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morning
in mid-December when I needed to pick up my aunt from the
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airport
. As
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soon
as I woke up and took a peek through my window, I immediately knew that it was going to be a
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cold
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morning
as I could
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see
fog covering the landscape above the ground. For a minute, I
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thought
that I would wait until the sun had
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come
out
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but
then decided against it, as my aunt wouldn’t like the delay.

So
, I took a taxi and hit the road after wearing all kinds of warm clothes to protect me from the assault of a
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cold
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winter
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morning
, as the temperature on that day was
probably
as low as minus 5 degree Celsius.
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But
, after arriving at the
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airport
, I came to know that there was a flight delay for about two hours
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because
of low visibility in the sky.
So
, I had no other option
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but
to wait at the
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airport
in open
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cold
, until my auntie arrived, as the
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airport
authority had restricted our access to the arrival lounge
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because
of security reasons.

Anyway
, I
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remember
this particular
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winter
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morning
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because
it was
really
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cold
for my liking.
Besides
, travelling to the
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airport
and waiting there for about 2 hours in
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cold
was a
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very
troubling experience for me
also
.
Finally
, I
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remember
it
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because
there was too much fog in the atmosphere on that day, and I was afraid of having an accident
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because
of the low visibility of the road.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a cold winter morning you remember. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
423 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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