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Describe your idea of a perfect home or a dream house. v.1

Describe your idea of a perfect home or a dream house. v. 1
Describe your idea of a perfect home or a dream house. You should say: where it would be located what it would look like what facilities this house would have and explain why this would be your perfect/dream house. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: Living in an environment full of air pollution, noise and hustling bustling of city life, I have always wanted to live in a secluded place close to a clear lake surrounded by trees, but certainly not too far away from the city centre. In other words, my dream home should be located in one of the quiet suburbs within a driving distance of the city so that I could have the best of both living in the city as well as the countryside. My dream home should have two floors with balconies all around so that I could look over the trees and enjoy the natural beauty of outside. I don’t exactly prefer any “colour pollution”, so my dream home should be painted with light colour paints from both inside and outside in order to provide it a “sublime” look. I want my dream home to have a perfectly designed interior with a large space inside. The exterior of the home should have the design and look of a “bungalow”, but it won’t be exactly a bungalow. I also want to make sure the windows of my dream home are designed and placed in such a way so that the interior of my home receives enough lights and air from all directions all the times. My dream home should be a “modern day” residence with all kinds of facilities such as large bedrooms, a large guestroom complete with bathroom, storage, TV and mini-fridge, a large dining space, a large kitchen with personal pantry storage, laundry facilities and a small, nice computer lounge.   All of my washrooms should be equipped with bathtubs. It would be a perfect dream home primarily this is the place where I would want to come back at the end of the day no matter where I am. My sweet home will be my perfect dream home because it will be built to offer me security and comfort like no other place in the world. I would call it my dream home also because this would be the place where I would be able to live with all of my family members in peace and harmony without being the subjects of unnecessary noise and disturbances. Finally, I would call it my perfect dream home because it would allow me an opportunity to interact with the mother nature in seclusion by sitting close to the lake.
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Describe
your
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idea
of a
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perfect
home or a
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dream
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house
. You should say: where it would
be located
what it would
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look
like what facilities this
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house
would have and
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explain
why this would be your perfect/dream
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house
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
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Model Answer 1: Living in an environment full of air pollution, noise and hustling bustling of city life, I have always wanted to
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live
in a secluded
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place
close to a
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clear
lake surrounded by trees,
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but
certainly
not too far away from the city
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centre
.
In other words
, my
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dream
home should
be located
in one of the quiet suburbs within a driving distance of the city
so
that I could have the best of both living in the city as
well
as the countryside.

My
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dream
home should have two floors with balconies all around
so
that I could
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look
over the trees and enjoy the natural beauty of outside. I don’t exactly prefer any “
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colour
pollution”,
so
my
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dream
home should
be painted
with light
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colour
paints from both inside and outside in order to provide it a “sublime”
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look
. I want my
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dream
home to have a
perfectly
designed interior with a
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large
space inside. The exterior of the home should have the design and
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look
of a “bungalow”,
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but
it won’t be exactly a bungalow. I
also
want to
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make
sure the windows of my
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dream
home
are designed
and placed in such a way
so
that the interior of my home receives
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enough
lights and air from all directions all the times.

My
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dream
home should be a “modern day” residence with all kinds of facilities such as
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large
bedrooms, a
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large
guestroom complete with bathroom, storage, TV and mini-fridge, a
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large
dining space, a
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large
kitchen with personal pantry storage, laundry facilities and a
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small
, nice computer lounge.
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All of my washrooms should
be equipped
with bathtubs.

It would be a
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perfect
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dream
home
primarily
this is the
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place
where I would want to
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come
back at the
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end
of the day no matter where I am. My sweet home will be my
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perfect
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dream
home
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because
it will
be built
to offer me security and comfort like no other
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place
in the world. I would call it my
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dream
home
also
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because
this would be the
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place
where I would be able to
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live
with all of my family members in peace and harmony without being the subjects of unnecessary noise and disturbances.
Finally
, I would call it my
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perfect
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dream
home
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because
it would
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allow
me an opportunity to interact with the mother nature in seclusion by sitting close to the lake.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
Language comes first. It’s not that language grows out of consciousness, if you haven’t got language, you can’t be conscious.
Alan Moore

IELTS speaking Describe your idea of a perfect home or a dream house. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
4 paragraphs
480 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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