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Describe the career you hope to have in the future. v.1

Describe the career you hope to have in the future. v. 1
Describe the career you hope to have in the future. You should say: what the job is what is involves why you chose it and explain why you are interested in this job. Model Answer 1: Today I am going to talk about my Dream Job for the future. I am going to tell you what the job is, what it involves and why I’d like to do it. My dream job would be to be a travel writer! Travel writers are often self-employed. They travel to interesting places and then write in magazines and newspapers. They also write the internet articles about their experiences. To do this job you have to be willing to go to lots of new places. You also need to be able to write fluently and in different styles for different publications. Travel writers must be very flexible, as you might need to go to difficult or uncomfortable places and to travel at short notice. Often travel writers need to have another job a well, as, unfortunately, you can’t really make a living out of this type of work. The reason I would like to do this job so much is that I love going to new places. Coming to Vietnam has been a new and wonderful experience for me. I would enjoy telling other people what it was like and encouraging them to go on an adventure of their own. I also like communicating ideas in writing, it would be wonderful to make a living out of the two things I enjoy most – travel and writing! Unfortunately, there are very few opportunities to make a living as a travel writer, so I think it might have to stay as my Dream Job, rather than my Real Job! Even so, I think it is important to have a dream, because otherwise how can you ever have a dream come true! [ Written by - Lucy Marris ( UK) ]   Sample Answer 2: Selecting a career is one of the most difficult things in life. If you cannot select the right path, you are to regret rest of your life. Considering all the issues, I have selected my future career. After completing my academic studies, I will move to make my dream come true. I want to be a noted musician and now will describe the issue here. The job of a musician is not so easy as it appears. We are highly amazed by the songs or music we listen in different places or occasion. But few of us know that it is really difficult to make the tunes with attractive rhythms. In fact, it is hard to operate all the musical instruments and composing song lyrics is more difficult. This is a type of challenge that everyone cannot confront with. So, I have decided to be a musician and create some of the best music of the time. To be a musician, one needs to focus on some specific issues. First of all, the knowledge of musical instruments is a must. The knowledge should be complete. The musician should be able to play almost all types of instruments spontaneously. On the other sides, the musician should also be skilled in creating unique lyrics. Music composition is the other preferable activity for the musician. So, it appears that the musician is involved with a good number of activities. Once the activities are done perfectly, there are chances that the musician would be able to create something special for his/ her audience. By the same time, the musician should also need to practice a lot with the instruments. When the musician will be performing at any venue, he should play the instruments in the right way. And thus, there are no alternatives of practising. I have chosen to be a musician in my career for various reasons. I love music. Listening music is my greatest hobby. Based on the hobby, I have started thinking to take it as my career. With the thought, I planned accordingly and dreaming of being a reputed musician. By the same time, I have started learning several musical instruments. I have started learning to play guitar and drums. Gradually, I will move for other instruments like flutes etc. Classical music attracts me more but in the present age, the demand for the classical music is on the decline. So, I will try to focus on the other demanding aspects of music. I do not wish to earn money from this job as I have plenty of wealth from my family. This is a passion for me. I want to spread my tunes across the country and the world as well. With the dream to be a famous musician, I have taken this career. This is an interesting job in many aspects. When someone becomes a musician, the majority of the people become familiar with the person. S/ he is treated with respect. By the same time, it brings a huge fame for the person which is not possible for any ordinary individual to gain. Influencing people is the other outcome of this profession. When you will talk in any forum, your statement will be prioritised. Actually, the fame you will have will make you acceptable to all strata of the society. You will have access to anywhere you want. The life will be easier and enjoyable for you. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a fascinating job you have heard about. Describe a challenging job or career you know about. Describe the dream job you wish to have.
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Describe
the
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career
you hope to have in the future. You should say: what the
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job
is what is involves why you chose it and
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explain
why you
are interested
in this
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job
. Model Answer 1:

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Today
I am going to
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talk
about my
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Dream
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Job
for the future. I am going to
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tell
you what the
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job
is, what it involves and why I’d like to do it. My
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dream
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job
would be to be a
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travel
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writer
!
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writers
are
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often
self-employed. They
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travel
to interesting
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places
and then write in magazines and newspapers. They
also
write the internet articles about their experiences. To do this
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job
you
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have to
be willing to go to lots of new
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places
. You
also
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need
to be able to write
fluently
and in
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different
styles for
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different
publications.
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Travel
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writers
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must
be
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very
flexible, as you might
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need
to go to
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difficult
or uncomfortable
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places
and to
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travel
at short notice.
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Often
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travel
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writers
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need
to have another
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job
a
well
, as, unfortunately, you can’t
really
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make
a living out of this type of work. The reason I would like to do this
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job
so
much is that I
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love
going to new
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places
. Coming to Vietnam has been a new and wonderful experience for me. I would enjoy telling
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other
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people
what it was like and encouraging them to go on an adventure of their
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own
. I
also
like communicating
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ideas
in writing, it would be wonderful to
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make
a living out of the two things I enjoy most
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–
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travel
and writing! Unfortunately, there are
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very
few opportunities to
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make
a living as a
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travel
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writer
,
so
I
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think
it might
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have to
stay as my
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Dream
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,
rather
than my Real
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! Even
so
, I
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think
it is
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important
to have a
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dream
,
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because
otherwise
how can you ever have a
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dream
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come
true!
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-
Lucy
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Marris
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UK)
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Sample Answer 2:

Selecting a
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career
is one of the most
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difficult
things in life. If you cannot select the
right
path, you are to regret rest of your life. Considering all the issues, I have selected my future
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career
. After completing my academic studies, I will
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move
to
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make
my
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dream
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come
true. I want to be a noted
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musician
and
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now
will
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describe
the issue here.

The
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job
of a
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musician
is not
so
easy as it appears. We are
highly
amazed by the songs or
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music
we listen in
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different
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places
or occasion.
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But
few of us know that it is
really
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difficult
to
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make
the tunes with attractive rhythms. In fact, it is
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hard
to operate all the musical
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instruments
and composing song lyrics is more
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difficult
. This is a type of challenge that everyone cannot confront with.
So
, I have decided to be a
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musician
and create
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some
of the best
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music
of the time.

To be a
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musician
, one
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needs
to focus on
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some
specific issues.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, the knowledge of musical
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instruments
is a
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must
. The knowledge should be complete. The
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musician
should be able to play almost all types of
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instruments
spontaneously
. On the
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other
sides, the
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musician
should
also
be skilled
in creating unique lyrics.
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Music
composition is the
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other
preferable activity for the
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musician
.
So
, it appears that the
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musician
is involved
with a
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good
number of activities. Once the activities
are done
perfectly
, there are chances that the
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musician
would be able to create something special for his/ her audience. By the same time, the
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musician
should
also
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need
to practice a lot with the
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instruments
. When the
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musician
will be performing at any venue, he should play the
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instruments
in the
right
way. And
thus
, there are no alternatives of
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practising
.

I have chosen to be a
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musician
in my
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career
for various reasons. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
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music
. Listening
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music
is my greatest hobby. Based on the hobby, I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
thinking to take it as my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
career
. With the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
, I planned
accordingly
and dreaming of being a reputed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
musician
. By the same time, I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
learning several musical
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instruments
. I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
learning to play guitar and drums.
Gradually
, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
for
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other
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instruments
like flutes etc. Classical
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music
attracts me more
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but
in the present age, the demand for the classical
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music
is on the decline.
So
, I will try to focus on the
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other
demanding aspects of
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music
. I do not wish to earn money from this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
as I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of wealth from my family. This is a passion for me. I want to spread my tunes across the country and the world as
well
. With the
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dream
to be a
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famous
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musician
, I have taken this career.

This is an interesting
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job
in
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many
aspects. When someone becomes a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
musician
, the majority of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
become familiar with the person. S/ he
is treated
with respect. By the same time, it brings a huge fame for the person which is not possible for any ordinary individual to gain. Influencing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
is the
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other
outcome of this profession. When you will
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talk
in any forum, your statement will be
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prioritised
.
Actually
, the fame you will have will
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make
you acceptable to all strata of the society. You will have access to anywhere you want. The life will be easier and enjoyable for you.

Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to
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talk
about this Cue Card would enable you to
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talk
about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
a fascinating
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job
you have heard about.
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Describe
a challenging
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job
or
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career
you know
about.
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Describe
the
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dream
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
you wish to have.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
108Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe the career you hope to have in the future. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
8 paragraphs
948 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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