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Describe the job/ career you have or you hope to have. v.1

Describe the job/ career you have or you hope to have. v. 1
Describe the job/ career you have or you hope to have. You should say: what the job is what it involves why you chose it and explain why you like this job or interested in it. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]
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Describe
the job/ career you have or you hope to have. You should say: what the job is what it involves why you chose it and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
why you like this job or interested in it. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
Loose punctuation mark.
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0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
If you talk to a man in a language he understands, that goes to his head. If you talk to him in his own language, that goes to his heart.
Nelson Mandela

IELTS speaking Describe the job/ career you have or you hope to have. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
73 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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